搜搜考试网帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误
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帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误
Duringmy intern,responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department.Thejob involves set all tables,lay cloths,busboys,dish up and clear table,etc.and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays.With excellentplanning capability,I always created a surprise by a creative activity andmade them into practice.
淘宝某子简历给我做的英文简历 我说有很多语法错误 她死不认账 让我找英语专八的人确认
希望英语好的大家帮帮忙 我把第一段挑出来给大家看看
Duringmy intern,responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department.Thejob involves set all tables,lay cloths,busboys,dish up and clear table,etc.and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays.With excellentplanning capability,I always created a surprise by a creative activity andmade them into practice.
淘宝某子简历给我做的英文简历 我说有很多语法错误 她死不认账 让我找英语专八的人确认
希望英语好的大家帮帮忙 我把第一段挑出来给大家看看
首句,responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department没有主语.Thejob involves Set all tables,lay all cloths,busboys(餐馆勤杂工,这个是名词放在这里不合适,其他都是动词,去掉这个句子就对了)dish up and clear table.“and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays.”这句话的主语应该是“人 ”而不是“ the job ”,所以建议两句话拆分开.“created a surprise”也不是常用搭配,surprise和最后的“made them into practice.”中的them,不搭.