搜搜考试网英语日记求修改,若能指出所改地方修改原因就更好了.
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英语日记求修改,若能指出所改地方修改原因就更好了.
yesterday i feel so sad for i was ill.so i didn't to do anything,no read,no listen the text.i feel i'm wasting my time.i only allow a day for rest.i hope have the good life.so i can't rest to everyday.i had read in the word,that is "when you want something you've never had.you have to do something you've never done." i will adhere to learn english,is day,and one day.i can to make me dream come ture.
没有人 帮我改改吗？我真的很想学好呢，将十分感激！
yesterday i feel so sad for i was ill.so i didn't to do anything,no read,no listen the text.i feel i'm wasting my time.i only allow a day for rest.i hope have the good life.so i can't rest to everyday.i had read in the word,that is "when you want something you've never had.you have to do something you've never done." i will adhere to learn english,is day,and one day.i can to make me dream come ture.
没有人 帮我改改吗？我真的很想学好呢，将十分感激！
看样子还是小学吧?
Yesterday i feel so sad for i was ill这一句,前半部分既然是yesterday,就要用到过去式,feel改成felt.后半部分的for,我觉得用because更为合适些,所以修改句为：Yesterday I felt so sad because I was ill.（或者你也可以用because of,后跟从句,以后上中学了会学到.）
so i didn't to do anything,no read,no listen the text.这一句的语病……貌似更多了,先看do not to do sth.,在英语里根本没有这种句型,do是助动词,后跟动词原形,或者在这里你用can not,can not是情态动词,后跟动词原形.后半部分呢,我认为还是这样写比较好,毕竟这种句型是正确的,考试这样写不会漏分：I can not read,can not listen.(the text我认为还是不要的好)
I feel i'm wasting my time.这一句中的wasting是adj.,即形容词,不可以作动词用,所以应该是
I felt I am wasted my time.wated 是动词.
再接着下一句 only allow a day for rest,这一句语病也没什么,就是allow应该用过去式,加上个myself(表明是谁）,就是：I only allowed myself a day for rest.
i hope have the good life.so i can't rest to everyday.呃,这句话我觉得应该这样改：I hope I can have a good life.So I can not rest everyday.在英语中句型语法很重要,没有have the good life的说法,把the换成a,也没有rest to 的句型,把to删去.
继续下一句,引号里的应该没有语病,就看外面的,had read in the word这一句有语法上的错误,应该是：I read a sentence,不要用word,是一个单词的意思.
i will adhere to learn english,is day,and one day.后面那句有点多余（语法也不正确）,删去.english的E要用大写的.要注意.
i can to make me dream come ture.没有can to do sth.的说法,直接can do sth.就行了.
其实在英语中死记硬背很重要,我也是这样子靠背的.这些都是自己想的,希望能够帮助你!
Yesterday i feel so sad for i was ill这一句,前半部分既然是yesterday,就要用到过去式,feel改成felt.后半部分的for,我觉得用because更为合适些,所以修改句为：Yesterday I felt so sad because I was ill.（或者你也可以用because of,后跟从句,以后上中学了会学到.）
so i didn't to do anything,no read,no listen the text.这一句的语病……貌似更多了,先看do not to do sth.,在英语里根本没有这种句型,do是助动词,后跟动词原形,或者在这里你用can not,can not是情态动词,后跟动词原形.后半部分呢,我认为还是这样写比较好,毕竟这种句型是正确的,考试这样写不会漏分：I can not read,can not listen.(the text我认为还是不要的好)
I feel i'm wasting my time.这一句中的wasting是adj.,即形容词,不可以作动词用,所以应该是
I felt I am wasted my time.wated 是动词.
再接着下一句 only allow a day for rest,这一句语病也没什么,就是allow应该用过去式,加上个myself(表明是谁）,就是：I only allowed myself a day for rest.
i hope have the good life.so i can't rest to everyday.呃,这句话我觉得应该这样改：I hope I can have a good life.So I can not rest everyday.在英语中句型语法很重要,没有have the good life的说法,把the换成a,也没有rest to 的句型,把to删去.
继续下一句,引号里的应该没有语病,就看外面的,had read in the word这一句有语法上的错误,应该是：I read a sentence,不要用word,是一个单词的意思.
i will adhere to learn english,is day,and one day.后面那句有点多余（语法也不正确）,删去.english的E要用大写的.要注意.
i can to make me dream come ture.没有can to do sth.的说法,直接can do sth.就行了.
其实在英语中死记硬背很重要,我也是这样子靠背的.这些都是自己想的,希望能够帮助你!
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