搜搜考试网朋友的英语日记帮修改下,谢谢了!
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朋友的英语日记帮修改下,谢谢了!
Playing football is my favorite sport.For the first time in my life to play football was in 1986,when i was a boy of 12.since then,I have played football for 22 years.When I was still a student, I used to play football more than two hours a day .during my high school time, I entered for the BinYang Middle School Football Title Match every year,and always won a good place in the competition.In 1993,the rival and my team were tied in the 90 munites in the final, but we lost in penalty kick and won the runner-up at last. In November 1994,when I was studying in NanNing,I entered for the NanNing North District Footbool Match. But we lost the match because of the"Black whistle"! These day,I keep playing football ragularly.So much has change,but I am still eager to play football.
Playing football is my favorite sport.For the first time in my life to play football was in 1986,when i was a boy of 12.since then,I have played football for 22 years.When I was still a student, I used to play football more than two hours a day .during my high school time, I entered for the BinYang Middle School Football Title Match every year,and always won a good place in the competition.In 1993,the rival and my team were tied in the 90 munites in the final, but we lost in penalty kick and won the runner-up at last. In November 1994,when I was studying in NanNing,I entered for the NanNing North District Footbool Match. But we lost the match because of the"Black whistle"! These day,I keep playing football ragularly.So much has change,but I am still eager to play football.
Football(sport直接用球类) is my favorite sport.The first time(前面不用for) in my life to play football was in 1986 (不用逗号,when在前面才用)when I(大写) was a 12-year-old boy(这样好些把).since then,I have been playing(现在完成进行时 语言更加生动) football for 22 years.When I was still a(这里用什么"a middle school student"什么的好一点把) student,I used to play football more than two hours a day .During my high school time,I entered(enter后面直接加"加入的地方") the BinYang Middle School Football Title Match every year,and always won the competitions(获胜).In 1993,the rival and my team were tied in the 90 munites in the final,but we lost in penalty kick and won the runner-up at last.In November 1994,when I was studying in NanNing,I entered (一样) the NanNing North District Footbool Match.But we lost the match because of the"Black whistle"!These day,I keep playing football ragularly.So much has changed(have /has done 现在完成时),but I am still eager(be eager 对的) to play football.