搜搜考试网托福综合写作评分,Rembrandt的画的那篇,TPO3的
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托福综合写作评分,Rembrandt的画的那篇,TPO3的
The professor made the point that the protray of the lady is indeed Rembrandt's work,on the contrary,the opinion in the reading thinks that the protrary is not Rembrandt's work.
Firstly,Contrary to the belief in the reading that the clothing conflict that the woman in the protrait wears a white linen cap which only servant wear and a luxurious fur collar that no servants can afford at the same time,the professor says that the white of the cap is just because the fur colour over the top is painted.the artist just want wo increase the formal of the protrary.
Secondly,the professor says that the colour of the white fur reflects the light to the woman's face,it moved simple colours to illuminate the face.However,it contradicts the idea that made in the reading passage.The reading says that the fur below the face is dark,and it would absorb the light and the face will not look like this.
Thirdly,the professor says that reasons of the glued pieces of wood is to enlarge the picture so that it costs more money,and all the pieces are drawn by Rembrandt.While the reading held a different view by saying that although Rembrandt paints panels,but none of his work is glued by those panels.
So the listening is completely contrary to that in the reading.
我初次写综合写作啊,老师也就是让我自己找题目,他让我不要用模板,因为分会很低,然后我发现我话都说不周全（- -|||）,而且这篇文章其实超时了……
大虾尽管分往低里打吧,我3号拿给老师让他反省一下去（╮(╯▽╰)╭）
阿诺,要是有什么硬伤您发现了请千万要告诉我,比如说听力中大量要点丢失（我总觉得这个听力我基本没记下什么……）
没关系我还有8天……ALL WILL BE FINE……
TONIKAKU……阿里嘎多搞砸以马斯
好吧,我知道这种文章拿出来就死定了,30对9的差距啊差距,敢情我第一点第二点都听岔了
The professor made the point that the protray of the lady is indeed Rembrandt's work,on the contrary,the opinion in the reading thinks that the protrary is not Rembrandt's work.
Firstly,Contrary to the belief in the reading that the clothing conflict that the woman in the protrait wears a white linen cap which only servant wear and a luxurious fur collar that no servants can afford at the same time,the professor says that the white of the cap is just because the fur colour over the top is painted.the artist just want wo increase the formal of the protrary.
Secondly,the professor says that the colour of the white fur reflects the light to the woman's face,it moved simple colours to illuminate the face.However,it contradicts the idea that made in the reading passage.The reading says that the fur below the face is dark,and it would absorb the light and the face will not look like this.
Thirdly,the professor says that reasons of the glued pieces of wood is to enlarge the picture so that it costs more money,and all the pieces are drawn by Rembrandt.While the reading held a different view by saying that although Rembrandt paints panels,but none of his work is glued by those panels.
So the listening is completely contrary to that in the reading.
我初次写综合写作啊,老师也就是让我自己找题目,他让我不要用模板,因为分会很低,然后我发现我话都说不周全（- -|||）,而且这篇文章其实超时了……
大虾尽管分往低里打吧,我3号拿给老师让他反省一下去（╮(╯▽╰)╭）
阿诺,要是有什么硬伤您发现了请千万要告诉我,比如说听力中大量要点丢失（我总觉得这个听力我基本没记下什么……）
没关系我还有8天……ALL WILL BE FINE……
TONIKAKU……阿里嘎多搞砸以马斯
好吧,我知道这种文章拿出来就死定了,30对9的差距啊差距,敢情我第一点第二点都听岔了
缺2点貌似只能等级只能得1-1.5.这么说的话.1.5*3=4.5
再问： 您说的可是雅思？有折合成30分制的吗？还是说30分只有4.5！？？我连1/3都没吗？
再答： ...拜托，综合写作只有15分啊。。。独立写作再占15分啊。。。我指的是这篇能得4.5/15，不过托福最后算分没小数，所以没准能得5分再加上独立写作的分数才是写作分数。。。
再问： 您说的可是雅思？有折合成30分制的吗？还是说30分只有4.5！？？我连1/3都没吗？
再答： ...拜托，综合写作只有15分啊。。。独立写作再占15分啊。。。我指的是这篇能得4.5/15，不过托福最后算分没小数，所以没准能得5分再加上独立写作的分数才是写作分数。。。