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帮我检查一下我的英语作文有没有错.
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor.Because they can help cure patients,and they work in the hispital.So I had a lot of dream.But now I want to be a vet,because I love animals .I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day.I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor.Because they can help cure patients,and they work in the hispital.So I had a lot of dream.But now I want to be a vet,because I love animals .I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day.I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
改正如下：
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor.Because they can help cure patients,and they work in hispitals.So I had a lot of dreams.But now I want to be a vet,because I love animals .I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day.I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
Wish your dream would come true!祝你梦想成真!
再问： 前面不用过去式吗
再答： 你写的是in five years五年以后啊 如果是five years ago的话，那就用过去时。
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor.Because they can help cure patients,and they work in hispitals.So I had a lot of dreams.But now I want to be a vet,because I love animals .I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day.I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
Wish your dream would come true!祝你梦想成真!
再问： 前面不用过去式吗
再答： 你写的是in five years五年以后啊 如果是five years ago的话，那就用过去时。