搜搜考试网帮我检查一下这句英语有没有错
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帮我检查一下这句英语有没有错
Eeverone do not always be luky or unlunky,hold on your dream and achieve it.
Eeverone do not always be luky or unlunky,hold on your dream and achieve it.
前句谓语错的有点凶了,怎么会用do not be...
hold on不能直接加宾语your dream,必须改成hold onto或hold on to.
两句之间用逗号后,却缺少必要的连词连接；
另外还有一些单词拼写错误.
改正：Everyone is not always lucky or unlucky,so just hold on to (或hold onto) your dream and achieve it.
hold on不能直接加宾语your dream,必须改成hold onto或hold on to.
两句之间用逗号后,却缺少必要的连词连接；
另外还有一些单词拼写错误.
改正：Everyone is not always lucky or unlucky,so just hold on to (或hold onto) your dream and achieve it.