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英语高手们快来看看我的这篇作文!过几天就该我值日了!
我自己写了一段,各位帮我看看有错没或者帮我改进改进.没错我就直接上去念了
Good morning Mr.xia .Good morning class.
I am on duty today.My name is *** I'm 14.There are five people in my family.
May be you think that my home is small .
But I think it's very big.
Becase I love my family.
My father is a workter.
My mother the same .
I love them like they love me .
You may think that my family is poor ,
but I think we are happy.
Because my father hard-working,my mother the same,they didm't go to bed until I
finsh my homework.So ,I was very moved.
At the school ,We learn togother
I know you and you konw me .
I like to think,I love Grammar.
Here are four ways to learn English
Just read more、listen more 、write more、practice more,English will be not a
problem
Li Yang said,"to say to yourslef ,'I will let my country be proud of me' "
英语里有没有这样的写法)
You can say you're tired,but you can't say you can't .you must believe yourself .
That's all .Thanks.
英语高手们快来看看我的这篇作文!过几天就该我值日了!
我在你的原文基础上做了一些基于语法及语言流畅性的改动,不知道合不合你的要求.
Good morning ,Mr.xia .Good morning ,class.
Today I am on duty .My name is *** .I'm 14.There are five people in my family.
My family may be small in your eyes.
But it's very big in mine.
Becase I love my family.
My father is a worker,so is my mother.
I love them just like they love me .
My family may be poor in your eyes,
but we are happy.
Because my father is hard-working,so is my mother.They won't go to bed until I
finsh my homework.Thus,I was moved very much.
At school ,I study togother with you.
I know you and you konw me .
I like meditating,and I love Grammar.
Here are four ways to learn English well.
Just read more,listen more ,write more and practice more,English will not be hard to learn well.
Li Yang once said,"to say to yourslef ,'I will let my country be proud of me' " (我不知道
英语里有没有这样的写法)
You may be tired,but you can't give up.you must believe yourself .
That's all .Thanks.