We should say no to canteen

We should say no to canteen
Good morning,classmates and classmates,today my speech is aboutcanteen.
Recently,the informations about canteen may have already been heardmany times,maybe in the newspaper,maybe on the TV,even on the top of yourphone.Canteen is closely related to our life,there is an old saying,” breadis the stall of life.” But what’s this?Are you kidding me?Is this a iron inmy lunch?It’s very kind of you to add iron for free to improve our nutrition.We’revery disappointed with the poor quality of the food.Many dishes taste badlyand vegetables are often overcooked.Some students ate a … from the meal,what’smore,can you imagine a fly flow on your soup?And the price of the food is surprisinglyhigh.If we have three meals in the canteen,twenty or thirty Yuan is gone.I couldn’tstand anymore,touch your pocket,ask yourself how much money do you have?Besidesdon’t’ tell me that I’m going to market,when I enter the canteen,it’s usuallyvery crowded.As the number of students is ever increasing,there is not enoughspace and seats to allow us to have our meals there,it’s very funny for us tofind a seat like hungry lion?No,we need say no.can we see the canteen rampant?We couldn’t turn a blind eye to it,we should against them to win our right,now we must take some measures to win this battle!
Thank you!

先改一段供参考.
We should say no to canteen
Good morning, teacheres and classmates!
My speech today is about canteen.
Recently, the information about canteen may have already been heard quite often, you may read from newspapers, watch it from the TV, even on the screens of your mobile phone. Canteen is closely related to our life, there is an old saying,” bread is the stall of life.” But what’s this? Are you kidding me? Is this iron in my lunch? It’s very kind of you to add iron for free to improve our nutrition. 再答： 如果满意，再改后面部分。
再答： 请注意，information、iron都是不可数名词。
再问： 改的不错 ，改完必好评！！！ 可以追加分数！！
再答： 第二部分，最后一部分马上贴。
We’re all very disappointed with the poor quality of the food. Many dishes taste badly and vegetables are often overcooked. Some students even found xxx from their meal! What’s more, can you imagine a fly flying on your soup? And the price of the food is surprisingly high. If you have three meals in the canteen, you would pay twenty or thirty Yuan! I couldn’t stand anymore to touch your pocket, and ask yourself how much money you have. Besides, you may tell me that I’m going to market. However, when you enter the canteen, you will find it’s usuallyvery crowded.
再答： 最后一部分。
As the number of students is ever increasing, there is not enough space and seats to allow us to have our meals there, it’s very lucky for anyone to find a seat! Somewhat like a hungry hunting lion. No, we need to say no! We have to say no! Can we see the canteen rampant? We couldn’t turn a blind eye to it, we should be against them to win our right. We must take some measures to struggle and win!
Thank you!

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