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求英语大神帮忙修改语法错误,祝新年快乐,万事如意

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求英语大神帮忙修改语法错误,祝新年快乐,万事如意
有良心的人请不要抄袭我的读后感哦 Reading 《The Great Blue Yonder》
I picked up this book in the bookstore for its cover ,which was a picture of the blue sky.I thought the book which had such a beautiful cover must tell a fabulous story.As I expected,it did.
The main character,a boy called Harry,died suddenly in a car accident.Before his death,he just has had a quarrel with his sister for pens.He impulsively shouted out some words which made him felt regretful forever.
He said,well,we will see,we will see!And I hate you!Absolutely hate you!I never want to come back or to see any of you ever again!
Then he did.
He went to the earth again as a ghost to say sorry to his sister.He saw many other died people with regret.He saw faces of people around him after his death.Although everyone was said,they had to go on.
While reading this story,I almost felt it was telling the truth about the experience of died people.Actually,everyone have to die.I know it is a bit sad to talk about this,but it is true.We are all in the same boat,aren’t we?The question why do we live is not necessarily to be discussed after we are born.No matter how hard we think about this question,the truth is that we do live here.What we can do is helping each other when in difficulty and try our best not to leave any regretful things behind,because we are never certain whether we will have a chance to solve these things in the future.Remember to be modest ,for the earth will be turning even if you are gone.
求英语大神帮忙修改语法错误,祝新年快乐,万事如意
  I picked up this book in the bookstore for its cover , which was a picture of the blue sky. I thought the book with such a beautiful cover must tell a fabulous story. As was expected, it did.
The main character, a boy called Harry, died suddenly in a car accident. Before his death, he just had had a quarrel with his sister for pens. He impulsively shouted out some words which made him felt regretful forever.
  He said,"well, we will see, we will see! And I hate you! Absolutely hate you! I never want to come back or to see any of you ever again!"Then he did.
He went to the earth again as a ghost to say sorry to his sister. He saw many other died people with regret. He saw faces of people around him after his death. Although everyone was sad, they had to go on.
While reading this story, I almost felt it was telling the truth about the experience of died people. Actually, everyone has to die. I know it is a bit sad to talk about this, but it is true. We are all in the same boat, aren’t we? The question why  we live is not necessarily to be discussed after we are born. No matter how hard we think about this question, the truth is that we do live here. What we can do is helping each other when being in difficulty and try our best not to leave any regretful things behind, because we are never certain whether we will have a chance to solve these things in the future. Remember to be modest ,for the earth will be turning even if you are gone.