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MEG老师您好，最后冲刺了。一篇看图作文请您批改 画斜线加粗那句用的对么，第一次用(写完觉得怎么用了这么多HAVE老师帮我改改) 20满分 请老师打分 Dear Harry, How are things going with you? Today I’m writing to you about the changes that have taken place in our life since the policy “Reduce unnecessary burden for more effective learning” was carried out. i used to ger up very early in the morning,but now i get up at half past six.It is about 7:00 i go to school after having a nutritive breakfast, Usually, when i reach school, the time befor classes begin is in my possession .Because my eagerness to become a basketball player, i play basketball with my friends every morning. Ofcouse, i feel energitc in the class and actively answer my teachers question. What's more, we have a variety of after-class activities now,such as climbing,dancing and so on. I love these meaningful school life. After school, i go back home and have dinner with my family.Now we don't have much homework to do so that i have a free time every eving. I like using computers comunicating with my classemate or writing emails to my friends.Then, i go to bed at 11:00 ending up a school day's happy life. All in all, school life becomes more colorful than before so that everyone enjoys studing more.
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How are things going with you? Today I’m writing to you about the changes that have taken place in our life since the policy “Reduce unnecessary burden for more effective learning” was carried out.
I used to ger up very early in the morning,but now I get up at half past six.It is about 7:00 when I go to school after having a nutritive breakfast, Usually, when I reach school, the time before classes begin is in my possession .Because of my eagerness to become a basketball player, I play basketball with my friends every morning. Of course, I feel energitc in class and actively answer my teachers’ questions. What's more, we have a variety of after-class activities now,such as climbing,dancing and so on. I love this meaningful school life.
After school, I go back home and have dinner with my family.Now we don't have much homework to do so that I have a free time every evening. I like using computers to comunicate with my classemates or write emails to my friends.Then, I go to bed at 11:00 ending up a school day's happy life.
All in all, school life becomes more colorful than before so that everyone enjoys studying more.
那句话用的很正确，不错。同时注意 because 和because of..的区别。It is 7 o'clock when...和It is at 7 o'clock that...句型的区别。还有use sth to do...结构。
如果满分20分，可以得17分左右。继续加油！Wish you success.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
How are things going with you? Today I’m writing to you about the changes that have taken place in our life since the policy “Reduce unnecessary burden for more effective learning” was carried out.
I used to ger up very early in the morning,but now I get up at half past six.It is about 7:00 when I go to school after having a nutritive breakfast, Usually, when I reach school, the time before classes begin is in my possession .Because of my eagerness to become a basketball player, I play basketball with my friends every morning. Of course, I feel energitc in class and actively answer my teachers’ questions. What's more, we have a variety of after-class activities now,such as climbing,dancing and so on. I love this meaningful school life.
After school, I go back home and have dinner with my family.Now we don't have much homework to do so that I have a free time every evening. I like using computers to comunicate with my classemates or write emails to my friends.Then, I go to bed at 11:00 ending up a school day's happy life.
All in all, school life becomes more colorful than before so that everyone enjoys studying more.
那句话用的很正确，不错。同时注意 because 和because of..的区别。It is 7 o'clock when...和It is at 7 o'clock that...句型的区别。还有use sth to do...结构。
如果满分20分，可以得17分左右。继续加油！Wish you success.
最终答案：略