短文改错when I was an elementary student aging ten

短文改错when I was an elementary student aging ten

原文:
When I was an elementary school student aging ten,I took part in a singing competition in our city.This was my first time to be in a singing competition.In the day of the competition,I was asked to enter into a studio room,which there was only one person and a piano.The man asked me to sing in front of the microphone,following his piano playing.My mother was waiting for me outside the studio.I thought that I sang better at the time.So when I finished and walked out the studio,my mother asked,“What happened to your voices?Why couldn’t we hear you?” Then,I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone.
答案:
1．aging→ aged
【解析】错误类型：形容词误用.aged为形容词,意为“……岁的”
2.This→ That/It
【解析】错误类型：指示代词误用.that指代上文已提及或过去已发生的事,this指代下文将提及或之后将发生的事.此处改成It也可.
3．In→ On
【解析】错误类型：介词误用.在具体某一天应用介词on.on the day of the competition意为“在比赛那天”.
4．去掉enter后的into
【解析】错误类型：动词搭配错误.enter为及物动词,直接跟宾语,因此into多余了.
5．which→ where
【解析】错误类型：关系代词误用.where引导定语从句,修饰先行词a studio room,在定语从句中作地点状语.
6．better→ well
【解析】错误类型：比较级误用.句意为：我认为那次唱得很好,句中没有比较的含义.
7．So→ But
【解析】错误类型：连词误用.此处是转折关系,因此应该用But.
8．在out后加上of
【解析】错误类型：短语搭配错误.out of 是一个固定搭配,意为"从...出来".
9．voices→ voice
【解析】错误类型：名词单复数误用.每个人只有一种嗓音,因此用单数.
10．forget→ forgot
【解析】错误类型：时态误用.主句谓语动词realized为一般过去时,宾语从句的谓语动词也要用过去时.