英语对话 修改 要有一定英语专业的 因为还要加一点 《小红帽》

英语对话 修改 要有一定英语专业的 因为还要加一点 《小红帽》
小红帽
在路上
(一阵轻快的音乐由远而近,小红【Little Red Riding Hood】挎着篮子蹦跳跳地跳到花草旁)
Little Red Riding Hood：Wow!Flowers,how beautiful!（放下篮子采花）One flower ,two flowers,three flowers.
大灰狼【Wolf】：（随着一阵低沉的音乐,Wolf大步地走上台）I am wolf.I am hungry.(做找东西状,东张西望) Here is a little red riding hood.Hi!Little Red Riding Hood.Where are you going?(做狡猾的样子和Little Red Riding Hood打招呼)
Little Red Riding Hood：(手摸辫子,天真地回答)To Grandma’s．Grandma is ill.
Wolf：（自言自语）I' ll eat Grandma.
Wolf：（从树后出来,边走边说）I am very hungry now.(做找寻的样子)Where is Grandma’ s house?(高兴地对观众说)Aha ,it’s here.(敲门)Bang,Bang,Bang．
灰狼已经把外婆吞到了肚子里.【这里是不是应该加点对话】
Wolf：（得意地拍拍肚子,翘起大拇指）Yummy!I’ll sleep.【文章对不上有木有】
Little Red Riding Hood：(高兴地敲门)Grandma．Grandma．
Wolf：(装扮成Grandma的声音) Who is it?
Little Red Riding Hood：It’s me.Little Red Riding Hood.What a strange noise!
Wolf：Come in,Come in.
Little Red Riding Hood：(蹦跳着进来,把篮子放在桌子上,走到床前一看,跳回几步)Oh!What are big ears!
Wolf：I can listen to your sweet voice.
Little Red Riding Hood：Wow!What a big eyes!
Wolf：I can see you pretty face.
【有木有觉得这后面的句子有点语句不通.】
Little Red Riding Hood：Oh!What a big hand.
Wolf：I can hug you.
Little Red Riding Hood：（跪在床前,拉起Wolf的手,边摸边说）Look!What a big hands?】
Wolf：(从床上跳起来说)I can eat you!
Little Red Riding Hood：(拼命地跑)Oh!No!No!
Wolf：（追到Little Red Riding Hood,做吃状,拍拍肚子说）It’s delicious.I still sleep.I like sleeping.
大家帮我看下有木有病句 明天就比赛了

Wolf：（得意地拍拍肚子,翘起大拇指）Yummy!I’m going to sleep. 【文章对不上有木有】
Little Red Riding Hood：(蹦跳着进来,把篮子放在桌子上,走到床前一看,跳回几步)Oh! Why do you have so big ears!
Wolf：For listening to your sweet voice clearly.
Little Red Riding Hood：Wow! What big eyes!
Wolf：To see your pretty face carefully.
把后来跪在床前拉起狼的手那段删了吧.Wolf：I can hug you. ……and,I will eat you!
再问： 加clearly. 和carefully.是有何用呢 嗯嗯 你说的可以删 可是最后大灰狼是要把小红帽吃掉的啊 我应该怎么串