搜搜考试网请各位帮忙修改一下这个英语小故事,自己写的,要求口语化!
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请各位帮忙修改一下这个英语小故事,自己写的,要求口语化!
It was time to get up,Ribit still asleep,Mom called him to get up,Ribit refused to go to the kindergarten,Mom said:"Are you afraid of vaccination today?" Ribit said:"Mom,you're so smart." Mother said:" Don't worry.This won't hurt a bit.It will be just like a mosquito bite."
Ribit and mother came to the kindergarten,to see his friend Piggy would not go in.Mom let Ribit go to an injection first.Ribit walked in bravely.Then Ribit back to Piggy and said:” Injection does not hurt,as was once bitten by mosquitoes.I am a man,not afraid of pain!”
Lisa heard this and she went to have an injection,too.They looked each other and laughed together happy.
请帮忙看下语法,词汇和表达等是否有问题,要求口语化!
It was time to get up,Ribit still asleep,Mom called him to get up,Ribit refused to go to the kindergarten,Mom said:"Are you afraid of vaccination today?" Ribit said:"Mom,you're so smart." Mother said:" Don't worry.This won't hurt a bit.It will be just like a mosquito bite."
Ribit and mother came to the kindergarten,to see his friend Piggy would not go in.Mom let Ribit go to an injection first.Ribit walked in bravely.Then Ribit back to Piggy and said:” Injection does not hurt,as was once bitten by mosquitoes.I am a man,not afraid of pain!”
Lisa heard this and she went to have an injection,too.They looked each other and laughed together happy.
请帮忙看下语法,词汇和表达等是否有问题,要求口语化!
It was time to get up,Ribit was still in bed.Mom came in and ask him to get up,Ribit refuse to go,he don't want to go to the kindergarten.So his mom asked,"Is that because you're afraid of the vaccination today?" Ribit was surprised,"Mom,how did you know?" She smiled and said,"Don't worry,Ribit.It won't hurt at all,it will be just like a mosquito bite."
Ribit agreed to go to the kindergarten with his mother,and at the front of the school,they saw Ribit's friend Piggy refuse to go in.Ribit stepped in with his head held high.Moments later,he came out,walk to Piggy and said,"It didn't hurt at all,it was like bitten by a mosquitoes.I am a man,I am not afraid of this kind of pain."
Piggy heard this and went in for her vaccination too.When she finished,they looked at each other and laughed together happily.
没什么大问题,更多的语言习惯的不同,还有a和the的用法.
我把所有的said都改了,这样念起来不单调.lz要改回去也可以.
Ribit agreed to go to the kindergarten with his mother,and at the front of the school,they saw Ribit's friend Piggy refuse to go in.Ribit stepped in with his head held high.Moments later,he came out,walk to Piggy and said,"It didn't hurt at all,it was like bitten by a mosquitoes.I am a man,I am not afraid of this kind of pain."
Piggy heard this and went in for her vaccination too.When she finished,they looked at each other and laughed together happily.
没什么大问题,更多的语言习惯的不同,还有a和the的用法.
我把所有的said都改了,这样念起来不单调.lz要改回去也可以.