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英语语法修改下帮忙润润色,改改语法错误,谢谢EXECUTIVE SUMMARYThe report is about t

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英语语法修改下
帮忙润润色,改改语法错误,谢谢
EXECUTIVE SUMMARY
The report is about the survey on the satisfaction level of students who are studying at the private educational institutions.It includes the followings:
1.How to formulate a research specification.
2.Implement the research project within agreed procedures specification.
3.Evaluate the research outcomes.
4.Present the research out comes.
英语语法修改下帮忙润润色,改改语法错误,谢谢EXECUTIVE SUMMARYThe report is about t
整个语句其实都写的不错,没有明显的语法错误,基本都是很规范的工作用语,只是第二句中的procedures specification,这样写读起来不是很舒服,建议是否可以改成specification of prcedures,还有建议把within改成to, within有点中文化的感觉,你想表达的意思应该是 把研究项目的结果在已经认定的流程规范中做implementation。不过一般英语习惯上奖惩把something implement到 somewhere.
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