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请教英文高手,帮忙修改下,谢谢
Good morning .I am glad to be here for this interview.
First,let me introduce myself .my name is zhang lei ,I am 23 years old , I am from inner Mongolia . I often dream that one day I would be as pleasure as those educationist who could serve our society .Having this dream, I was applied by hulunbeier college four years ago,and my major is preschool education .So I will graduate from this college in July 2008 .Now all my hard work has a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you.
Second, I am open_minded, purposeful, honest and easy_going. I am adaptable, owing steady, industrious attitudes for everything. In addition ,I am apprehensive and responsible.
In my spare time, I have broad hobbies like other youths. I like reading, especially famous works and scientific books. By the via of reading those book I can study classical cultural and learn to the future. I also love football not playing just like watching. Chinese football is not best,but I believe that Chinese football team will have a best perform ,especially women football team in 2008 beijing olympic game since city of shenyang .
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keep on learning .of course , if I am given a chance to major preschool education in this university , I will study hard.
That's all, thank you.
垃圾广告，不是为了英语交流的不要进！
Good morning .I am glad to be here for this interview.
First,let me introduce myself .my name is zhang lei ,I am 23 years old , I am from inner Mongolia . I often dream that one day I would be as pleasure as those educationist who could serve our society .Having this dream, I was applied by hulunbeier college four years ago,and my major is preschool education .So I will graduate from this college in July 2008 .Now all my hard work has a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you.
Second, I am open_minded, purposeful, honest and easy_going. I am adaptable, owing steady, industrious attitudes for everything. In addition ,I am apprehensive and responsible.
In my spare time, I have broad hobbies like other youths. I like reading, especially famous works and scientific books. By the via of reading those book I can study classical cultural and learn to the future. I also love football not playing just like watching. Chinese football is not best,but I believe that Chinese football team will have a best perform ,especially women football team in 2008 beijing olympic game since city of shenyang .
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keep on learning .of course , if I am given a chance to major preschool education in this university , I will study hard.
That's all, thank you.
垃圾广告，不是为了英语交流的不要进！
Good morning ,everyone.(加上这个称呼会比较好).Today I am glad to have the chance(有这个荣幸) for this interview.
Firstly,(用副词)let me introduce myself .my name is zhang lei ,I am 23 years old ,I am from inner Mongolia .I often dream that one day I will be as pleasure as those educationist who could serve our society .Having this dream,I was applied by hulunbeier college four years ago,and my major is preschool education .And(前后没因果关系不用SO) I will graduate from this college in July ,2008 .Now all of my hard work has a result for(承接) I have the(特指这次机会) chance to be interviewed by you.
Second,I am a person of (说明自己还是用个从句,后接形容词,表个性)open-minded,purposeful,honest and easy going.Also(并并列)I am adaptable,owing steady,industrious attitudes for everything.In addition ,I am apprehensive and responsible.
In my spare time,I have broad hobbies like other youths.I like reading,especially famous works and scientific books.By the via of reading those book I can study classical cultural and learn to the future.I also like(与前面并列,表同一层意思) football not playing just like watching.Chinese football is not best,but I believe that Chinese football team will have a best performance(接名词) in Beijing Olympic Games 2008,especially women football team .
I always believe that someone(泛指某个) will easily lag behind unless he keep on learning .of course ,if I will be employed by this university ,I will study more hard.
That's all,thank you.
Firstly,(用副词)let me introduce myself .my name is zhang lei ,I am 23 years old ,I am from inner Mongolia .I often dream that one day I will be as pleasure as those educationist who could serve our society .Having this dream,I was applied by hulunbeier college four years ago,and my major is preschool education .And(前后没因果关系不用SO) I will graduate from this college in July ,2008 .Now all of my hard work has a result for(承接) I have the(特指这次机会) chance to be interviewed by you.
Second,I am a person of (说明自己还是用个从句,后接形容词,表个性)open-minded,purposeful,honest and easy going.Also(并并列)I am adaptable,owing steady,industrious attitudes for everything.In addition ,I am apprehensive and responsible.
In my spare time,I have broad hobbies like other youths.I like reading,especially famous works and scientific books.By the via of reading those book I can study classical cultural and learn to the future.I also like(与前面并列,表同一层意思) football not playing just like watching.Chinese football is not best,but I believe that Chinese football team will have a best performance(接名词) in Beijing Olympic Games 2008,especially women football team .
I always believe that someone(泛指某个) will easily lag behind unless he keep on learning .of course ,if I will be employed by this university ,I will study more hard.
That's all,thank you.