The Terminal is my favorite movie.Tom Hanks performed it.It

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The Terminal is my favorite movie.Tom Hanks performed it.It tells us the important of peace,and how to keep alive when you have nothing.In this movie,Tom is a French man,he can’t speak English.Because his country was destroyed by the war,he lost his nationality,so he couldn’t enter the United States,he had to stay in the airport.Tom didn’t lose heart,he hoped his country to win,only then would he have a chance to enter America.He started to study English really hard.During the time in the airport,he had lots of difficulties,he even lost his passport.Luckily,Tom’s country won the war.At last,Tom could enter America.Also,he had a chance to achieve his dream.
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不好意思,有一些错误我得帮你指出来!
[错误1]It tells us the importance of peace.
[改进1]另外这句话可以用更好的方式表达,以下是我的建议：
It makes us understood the importance of peace better.
[错误2]在你这句话中,really不可使用,因为really和hard都是副词,重复了：
He started to study English really hard.
[改进2]he had lots of difficulties 这句中,如果把had改为met效果更佳.
[你的美句]个人认为你这句写得还不错：
Tom didn’t lose heart,he hoped his country to win,only then would he have a chance to enter America.尤其是only then would he...可算美句~
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