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英语改错I'm a middle school student.i like to make friendwith pe

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英语改错
I'm a middle school student.i like to make friend
with people and always try my best to get on with them.
but last week i happened to hear one of my classmate
speaking ill of me with others behind my back,it
made me very sad .she said what i was fat and acted
as stupid as a bear.i had been kind to her,but why
did she smile at my appearance?i was much hurt.i
really wish i could succeed in lose weight in just
a few days,but,anyhow,no one has the right
to laugh at others whatever beautiful she is.
英语改错I'm a middle school student.i like to make friendwith pe
I'm a middle school student.I like to make (friends)
with people and always try my best to get on with them.
but last week I happened to hear one of my (classmates)
speaking ill of me with others behind my back,(which)
made me very sad .she said (that) I was fat and acted
as stupid as a bear (did).I had been kind to her,but why
did she (laugh) at my appearance?I was much hurt.I
really wish I could succeed in (losing) weight in just
a few days,(and),anyhow,no one has the right
to laugh at others (however) beautiful she is.
楼上说的ill 改为illness是不必要的 speak ill of本来就是固定搭配,等于speak badly of;had 改为have也是错误的,因为那是在讲过去的事,用过去完成时表示从过去到那件事发生为止“had been kind to her”;最后一个有“无论多么漂亮”的意思,所以要用however
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