Book Review for the Old Man and the Sea

Book Review for the Old Man and the Sea
It’s a wonderful story about an old fisherman named Santiago,He has not caught any fish for 84 days.So other people begin to believe that he has no chance to catch any fish,while the old man disagrees.The old man still goes out to fish on the 85th day and he believes that his fishing skills will eventually bring him a great fortune.After great efforts,Santiago eventually gets a big Marlin.Of course you can imagine how excited he is.He ties the fish to the boat.And then he sets foot on the way home .Unfortunately,things don't go well up to his expectation.The man encounters a series of difficulties on his way home.He has to fight with many species of sharks who come to eat the Marlin.Although the old man is extremely tired,he refuses to give in.He just keeps fighting.When he lands,the only thing of the big Marlin left is the fishbone.
Did the old man succeed?Different people might have different points of view.But in my opinion,although the only thing the man tacks back is the fishbone of the big Marlin which seems useless,he was still the winner.Because whether a man is a winner or not doesn’t depend on how many he gets,but depends on how hard he works in order to reach his goal.And there’s no doubt that the man has tried his best.I do admire him from the bottom of my heart.
So I have to say,the old fisherman,Santiago,was a winner.
In the past,I asked myself some questions sometimes.If I am in trouble,will I be as brave as possible?If I have been very tired because of the trouble,will I keep trying and not give up until I reach my goal?Maybe it doesn’t matter what the answers were before.The thing which is much more important is how I will behave in the future.
A man can be destroyed but not be defeated.
I will never forget what Santiago said.
The courage of the old man will inspire me forever.
I am so sure I will gradually become the one who is brave and strong enough to face all difficulties without any fear.
Because the old fisherman,Santiago,has told me that everyone is able to be even more powerful than you had ever imagined as long as he believes he can.
麻烦高手帮忙看看上面那篇文章
请帮我看看有没有很严重的拼写或者语法错误
如果高手觉得错误实在很多的话.TT 劳烦尽量指出吧= =
那么,

Book Review for the Old Man and the Sea
It’s a wonderful story about an old fisherman named Santiago,He has not got any fish for 84 days.So other people begin to believe that he has no chance to catch any fish,while the old man disagrees.The old man still goes out to fish on the 85th day and he believes that his fishing skills will eventually bring him a great fortune.After great efforts,Santiago eventually gets a big Marlin.Of course you can imagine how excited he is.He ties the fish to the boat.And then he sets foot on the way home .Unfortunately,things don't go well up to his expectation.The man encounters a series of difficulties on his way home.He has to fight with different species of sharks which come to eat the Marlin.Although the old man is extremely tired,he refuses to give in.He just keeps fighting.When he lands,the only thing of the big Marlin left is the fishbone.
Is the old man successful?Different people might have different points of view.But in my opinion,although the only thing the man tacks back is the fishbone of the big Marlin which seems useless,he is still the winner.Because whether a man is a winner or not doesn’t depend on how much he gets,but depend on how hard he works in order to reach his goal.And there’s no doubt that the man has tried his best.I do admire him from the bottom of my heart.
So I have to say,the old fisherman,Santiago,is a winner.
In the past,I asked myself some questions sometimes.If I am in trouble,will I be as brave as possible?If I have been very tired because of the trouble,will I keep trying and not give up until I reach my goal?Maybe it doesn’t matter what the answers were before.The most important is how I will behave in the future.
A man can be destroyed but not be defeated.
I will never forget what Santiago said.
The courage of the old man will inspire me forever.
I am so sure I will gradually become the one who is brave and strong enough to face all difficulties without any fear.
Because the old fisherman,Santiago,has told me that everyone is able to be even more powerful than you have ever imagined as long as he believes he can.
写得很不错的,我想在修改的地方做上标记,可是只要粘贴上来,记号就没有了,你只能自己找了