搜搜考试网英语自我介绍 帮我看看我有没有语法错误哦
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英语自我介绍 帮我看看我有没有语法错误哦
Hello,everyone!My name is Gong Hongxian.My English name is Avril.I’m a student from Jiangbei foreign language school.I’m in Class three Grade seven.I am 13 years old now.I'm an active ,lovely and clever girl.I’m good at singing,playing sports and photography.I also like soccer,and my favorite team is Argentina,because they have Lionel Messi.He is really handsome and very good at playing soccer.I enjoy most of my time listening to music and playing soccer or basketball.And I also like reading,it’s useful and relaxing for me.Do you like me?
Hello,everyone!My name is Gong Hongxian.My English name is Avril.I’m a student from Jiangbei foreign language school.I’m in Class three Grade seven.I am 13 years old now.I'm an active ,lovely and clever girl.I’m good at singing,playing sports and photography.I also like soccer,and my favorite team is Argentina,because they have Lionel Messi.He is really handsome and very good at playing soccer.I enjoy most of my time listening to music and playing soccer or basketball.And I also like reading,it’s useful and relaxing for me.Do you like me?
1,把foreign language school改为首字母大写
2,and taking photography
3,he is really handsome and he is good at palying soccer,帅气和足球棒不是同种词性,注意一下.
4,it 's useful for me .it can make me feel relaxed.
我发现你很喜欢用and 连接,其实你要注意词性,还有不是同一个性质的事情要分开说
2,and taking photography
3,he is really handsome and he is good at palying soccer,帅气和足球棒不是同种词性,注意一下.
4,it 's useful for me .it can make me feel relaxed.
我发现你很喜欢用and 连接,其实你要注意词性,还有不是同一个性质的事情要分开说