英语翻译My feeling about《a fire》The story is mainly about:The ho

英语翻译
My feeling about《a fire》
The story is mainly about:The house is on fire,The fireman arrived in time to put out the fire,later we discovered that the cause of the fire was a lighted cigaertte,From that day on words,My father gave up smokeing.
My feeling about:Everyone should be careful,Do not like the father in the story of the same careless ,Throw a cigavette on the carpet,Consigned to the flames,But for firemen arrived in time,May also burn other people go!
This is areally great story,You should read it.

嗯..我在不大改的情况下给你微调一下.
My feeling about《a fire》
The story is mainly about:The house was on fire.The fireman arrived in time to put out the fire, and later we discovered that the cause of the fire was a lighted cigarette. From that day the author's father gave up smoking.
My feeling about:(?)Everyone should be careful. Do not like the father in the story of the same careless(?) , throwing a cigavette on the carpet. Consigned to the flames(?),But for firemen arrived in time,May also burn other people go!(?)
This is areally great story,You should read it.
错误还是比较多的,相对第二段,第一段的错误较少.lz应该把语法好好看看.第二段的中式语法太严重了导致我有点看不懂了.拼写有两个错误,smoking和cigarette.然后就是标点符号的运用,在句号后面应该空格后大写,逗号不需要大写.但是,逗号的运用也不能随便.这样吧,我把我理解到的lz的读后感第二段给改一下.
From my point of view, everyone should avoid doing the similar things as what the author's careless father has done in the story, throwing lighted cigarettes on the carpet, which may easily catch fire in the house. Fortunately, the firemen arrived in time, or the other people may be injured.
我也是个正在努力学英语的学生..这个只是交流...希望楼主能加油~再接再厉啊!~
再问： 这位大哥，我才小学五年级
再答： ....我是姐姐. 这样啊.那你的水平还不错诶!!虽然我不知道5年纪的水平应该是怎么样的.. 那你把标点符号改一改就好了.你老师会原谅你的!!相信我
再问： 这是要去比赛的。。。已经交了｜。｜ 没用了＃－＃
再答： 好。。楼主加油！！！！