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英语作文改错 不太难有什么语法问题的提出来 那些句子可以改的更好也说一说“I hate getting up early

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英语作文改错 不太难
有什么语法问题的提出来 那些句子可以改的更好也说一说
“I hate getting up early in the winter. “grumbled Chris pulls his dressing grown. He slows downstairs, and looks out the window. something is different, something is wrong. The earth is shrouded in white “it is a bad day!” As he speaks, Chris has got to pack his things for a journey “you must hurry to school as it is late!” Mom gives a whoop of rage. “but I should eat breakfast , May I not eat it?”
“No!”
“Well ,I know” Chris hesitates eat it ,though he will be late to school. In a few minute he comes rushing out of house. He jumped on his bike and rushed to school. Because of the heavy snow, he rides the bike very carefully. when he arrivals school the bell that shake the ears is ringing
英语作文改错 不太难有什么语法问题的提出来 那些句子可以改的更好也说一说“I hate getting up early
I hate getting up early in the winter.“grumbled Chris pulls his dressing grown.He slows downstairs,and looks out (1)OF the window.something is different,something is wrong.The earth is shrouded in white “it is a bad day!” As he speaks(2)SPEAKING,Chris has got (3)UP to pack his things for a journey “you must hurry to school as it is late!” Mom gives a whoop of rage.“but I should eat breakfast ,May I not eat it?”
“No!”
“Well ,I know” Chris hesitates eat (4)EATING it ,though he will be late to school.In a few minute(5)MINUTES he comes rushing out of house.He jumped on his bike and rushed to school.Because of the heavy snow,he rides the bike very carefully.when he arrivals(6)ARRIVED AT school the bell that shake (7)SHAKED the ears is ringing
要修改的部分在数字后面,这是我个人之见.