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第二节：书面表达（满分30分） 5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。 1. 时间、地点、任务、活动； 2. 老人们的反应； 3. 简短评论。注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计入总词数）。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly 以下是我写的 May 1，the students volunteers Li Yue and Zhang Hua from Class 3, Senior 2, went to see the elders in the Sunshine Nursing Home. They brought a lot of fruits and helpde the elders clean their rooms.The elders was very delighted to see the two volunteers. After the had cleaned all the room, They sat down and had a comfortable chat. The student talked about their school and the eldest talked about their daily life. Both the students and the elders had a really wonderful day. 以上是我写的 By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

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解题过程：
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
May 1，the students volunteers Li Yue and Zhang Hua from Class 3, Senior 2, went to see the elders in the Sunshine Nursing Home. They brought a lot of fruits and helpde（helped） the elders clean their rooms.The elders was（were) very delighted to see the two volunteers. After the (they) had cleaned all the room,(rooms.) They sat down and had a comfortable chat. The student talked about their school and the eldest talked about their daily life.( The two students talked about their school and the eldest one talked about their daily life.)Both the students and the elders had a really wonderful day.(I think it's our duty for the young to look after the old .)
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
祝你的英语成绩越来越棒！
最终答案：略

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