搜搜考试网求润色翻译一段文字.跪求英语大神
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求润色翻译一段文字.跪求英语大神
如题,帮我把这段英文润色一下,表达相同的意思,但不显得那么CHINESE,我觉得我写的太简单了.谢谢,比如用词,语法结构改一改.As you cansee in my academic transcript I only got 73% in freshman year and 74% in sophomore, but 77.8% in term one in junior and 84.6% in term two . Further more, I have firmfaith to do better in my last year of undergraduate course and completegraduation thesis wonderfully.
如题,帮我把这段英文润色一下,表达相同的意思,但不显得那么CHINESE,我觉得我写的太简单了.谢谢,比如用词,语法结构改一改.As you cansee in my academic transcript I only got 73% in freshman year and 74% in sophomore, but 77.8% in term one in junior and 84.6% in term two . Further more, I have firmfaith to do better in my last year of undergraduate course and completegraduation thesis wonderfully.
Regarding my transcripts,as you observe,the grade of being a freshman is at the top 73%,and it turns to be 74% the second year,and decreases to 77.8% and 84.6% in two semesters of the third one,but I feel confident that I would do much better last year,and complete all courses and graduation thesis as well.
再问： 74% ，84.6%是平均分……怎么成decrease 了……
再答： 你原始材料是带%，能理解为平均分么？？我的理解是班级前% 如果是表达这个意思，稍微改下。 Regarding my transcripts, as you observe, the average score of being a freshman is around 73, and it turns to be 74 in the second year,and increases to 77.8 and 84.6 respectively in two semesters of the third one, meanwhile,I feel confident that I would do much better last year, and complete all courses and graduation thesis as well.
再问： 74% ，84.6%是平均分……怎么成decrease 了……
再答： 你原始材料是带%，能理解为平均分么？？我的理解是班级前% 如果是表达这个意思，稍微改下。 Regarding my transcripts, as you observe, the average score of being a freshman is around 73, and it turns to be 74 in the second year,and increases to 77.8 and 84.6 respectively in two semesters of the third one, meanwhile,I feel confident that I would do much better last year, and complete all courses and graduation thesis as well.