搜搜考试网请问这篇短文还能及格吗?
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请问这篇短文还能及格吗?
因为按照考试时间写了一篇,感到有点仓促,所以书写很垃圾,如：
一屋不扫何以扫天下
答：the picture shows us a father who is talking with his son about cleaning the house.
it is obvious that his son want not to do（错误）some cleaning.but,obviously,as far as he is concerned,he should clean his clean.in the first place,by doing which can he develop his ability of independence,in the next place,which can obviously reduce parent's expression,making them happy,and make a good mood in them family,in the end,which can make his living actively,and enable to deal with his trouble easily in the society.
so,it is indispensable that he should clean his house
不知道这种烂书写能减多少分,以下是评分标准,请估个分,
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
因为按照考试时间写了一篇,感到有点仓促,所以书写很垃圾,如：
一屋不扫何以扫天下
答：the picture shows us a father who is talking with his son about cleaning the house.
it is obvious that his son want not to do（错误）some cleaning.but,obviously,as far as he is concerned,he should clean his clean.in the first place,by doing which can he develop his ability of independence,in the next place,which can obviously reduce parent's expression,making them happy,and make a good mood in them family,in the end,which can make his living actively,and enable to deal with his trouble easily in the society.
so,it is indispensable that he should clean his house
不知道这种烂书写能减多少分,以下是评分标准,请估个分,
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
19,首先书写不行,还有修改得挺乱的.有写好的意识,不过语法错较多.
in the first place,by doing this can he develop his ability of independence.in the next place,which can be obviously seen taht it can delight his parents ,and make a harmonious atmosphere in their family.in the end,it can make his life colourful ,and enable him to deal with his trouble easily in the future .
so,there is no argument that he should clean his house.
还有,我觉得题目应该是说做好大事（核武器）和小事（打扫卫生）之间的关系,而不是讨论他是否应该打扫卫生.
in the first place,by doing this can he develop his ability of independence.in the next place,which can be obviously seen taht it can delight his parents ,and make a harmonious atmosphere in their family.in the end,it can make his life colourful ,and enable him to deal with his trouble easily in the future .
so,there is no argument that he should clean his house.
还有,我觉得题目应该是说做好大事（核武器）和小事（打扫卫生）之间的关系,而不是讨论他是否应该打扫卫生.