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下面这段英语有哪些语法错误,或表达的比较牵强的地方呢?哪些地方可以说的更漂亮些

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下面这段英语有哪些语法错误,或表达的比较牵强的地方呢?哪些地方可以说的更漂亮些
Subject:"what is important to remember when you decide what type of advertising to use"
Before you decide to choose what type of advertising to use ,The 1st thing is to know what kind of cosumer is your target,
It's a good idea to split the consumers into different target by the their background ,You can do this by investaging the consumers' personal information ,such as gender,age,hobby
and etc.Also remember that the email address concerning the consumer is pretty important.My third tips is to respect your cost,how much moeny you will invest?Before we finish dont forget to to be familiar with market which your bussiness belong to.What might be better is investigate the infomation from your competitors.
下面这段英语有哪些语法错误,或表达的比较牵强的地方呢?哪些地方可以说的更漂亮些
how much moeny you will invest?的money打错了,其他地方都是对的,但我认为您的不定式用的太多了当你开始真正的商业化用语时,应该是简单句,少of,to,和从句,让人一目了然,显然在应考时用就较好