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May 12,2009 Tuesday sunny This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. This the first time I went to KTV, but at first I didn’t want to go when they invited me. Because today afternoon we had a math exam and I didn’t do well in it, which make me very sad. At the KTV, everyone expect me sang songs happily. I think I can’t sing a song well, so I listened to others all the time. At last, encouraged by my friend, I started singing the song I believe I can fly by microphone. It’s not important that I sing well. What the important is I have regained self-confidence and have become more cheerful. I well meet kind of troubles. Sometimes the trouble maybe difficult to deal with. But I should do is not to lose self-confidence at first. 谢谢老师 评改 给出分数，给出应该升华的地方。老师辛苦了
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May 12,2009 Tuesday sunny This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. This the first time I went to KTV, but at first I didn’t want to go when they invited me. Because today afternoon we had a math exam and I didn’t do well in it, which make me very sad. At the KTV, everyone expect me sang songs happily. I think I can’t sing a song well, so I listened to others all the time. At last, encouraged by my friend, I started singing the song I believe I can fly by microphone. It’s not important that I sing well. What the important is I have regained self-confidence and have become more cheerful. I well meet kind of troubles. Sometimes the trouble maybe difficult to deal with. But I should do is not to lose self-confidence at first. 1、 这次作文中你的句子有漏掉动词现象。第一个错误就是，应该改成this was。 2、 把went改成had gone，这是个固定句型。“是某人第几次做某事”，this was the ＋序数词＋that ＋过去完成时；this is the ＋序数词＋that ＋现在完成时 3、 今天下午 this afternoon 4、 把时态统一成过去时，改成made 5、 expect sb to do 所以改为expected me to sing 6、 改成the most important或者what is important，因为what是引导从句的，必须形成句子，不能丢掉is 7、 is后面是表语从句，应该加连词that。 8、 拼写错误，改成will 9、 用复数kinds 10、trouble一般是不可数名词，去掉s 11、这个句子也是缺少动词，maybe是副词，所以改成may be ，断开，be就是系动词了 12、这部分动词太多，直接写成should not 13、这次作文体现出句子结构的混乱，平时注意，一个句子只有一个谓语动词，必须有一个。描红部分是高级表达。
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最终答案：略
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May 12,2009 Tuesday sunny This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. This the first time I went to KTV, but at first I didn’t want to go when they invited me. Because today afternoon we had a math exam and I didn’t do well in it, which make me very sad. At the KTV, everyone expect me sang songs happily. I think I can’t sing a song well, so I listened to others all the time. At last, encouraged by my friend, I started singing the song I believe I can fly by microphone. It’s not important that I sing well. What the important is I have regained self-confidence and have become more cheerful. I well meet kind of troubles. Sometimes the trouble maybe difficult to deal with. But I should do is not to lose self-confidence at first. 1、 这次作文中你的句子有漏掉动词现象。第一个错误就是，应该改成this was。 2、 把went改成had gone，这是个固定句型。“是某人第几次做某事”，this was the ＋序数词＋that ＋过去完成时；this is the ＋序数词＋that ＋现在完成时 3、 今天下午 this afternoon 4、 把时态统一成过去时，改成made 5、 expect sb to do 所以改为expected me to sing 6、 改成the most important或者what is important，因为what是引导从句的，必须形成句子，不能丢掉is 7、 is后面是表语从句，应该加连词that。 8、 拼写错误，改成will 9、 用复数kinds 10、trouble一般是不可数名词，去掉s 11、这个句子也是缺少动词，maybe是副词，所以改成may be ，断开，be就是系动词了 12、这部分动词太多，直接写成should not 13、这次作文体现出句子结构的混乱，平时注意，一个句子只有一个谓语动词，必须有一个。描红部分是高级表达。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略