初中英语作文shopping on line

初中英语作文shopping on line

Shopping Online
Today, the development of the science and the technology are faster
than before. So more and more people like shopping online.
In our real life, it's different argument about online shopping.
Firstly, we can only see the picture of the goods. So we can only
decide by our eyes. Secondly, we maybe lost the enjoyment of
shopping with our friends. At same time, if we want to shopping online ,
we must have a computer at first. So we need to pay much money
for the computer. It's not suitable for everyone who don't have
a computer. At last, the security is the most serious problem online.
Our private information maybe discovered by somebody.
In fact,there are some cheat on Internet.
On the bright side, as we know online shopping is handy,
besides this most sellers use express to send the goods
to the buyers, so it can advance the development of the express.
Finally, in my view, every coin has two sides. We should
shopping online at a proper way.

上文一百六十多个词.其中,为了适应初中水平,“今天”、“商品”等词,
我有意识用today、goods这样的浅显单词表达.对于词汇比较丰富的中学生,
如果用“Nowadays”以及“commodity”、“merchandise”更拽一些.

以下所附英译汉,是为了你理解英语原文：
“今天,科学和技术的发展比以前更快.因此,越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物.
在现实生活中,对于网上购物有争议.首先,网购时,我们只能看到商品的图片.这样,我们只能通过自己的眼睛来判定.再者,我们也许（因网购而）失去了与亲友共同外出购物的乐趣.而且如果想在网上购物,必须先有一台电脑.因此,我们还得花些钱添置电脑,这不是适合每个人（的经济状况）.最后,尤其严重的问题是网络安全.我们的个人信息可能被泄露,事实上已经发生过一些网络诈骗.
在有利方面,众所周知网上购物很方便,大多数卖家用快递将货物发送给买家,因此可以促进快递业的发展.
最后,依我之见,任何事物都具有两面性.网购时,我们应该适度.”

希望我的解答能帮到你.如果还有什么不明白的,欢迎你追问.