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请修改一下这段英文 急迫!
自我感觉水平不怎么样 但是又不知道错在什么地方 请各位大侠指教!
Dear sir or madam:
Thank you for your attention to this letter.This letter is from CBA (Chinese basketball Association) to find any potential opportunities to work with together.
As the authority of Chinese basketball we feel that we have the responsibility to develop this sport in all fields.Besides our effort we also need direct and indirect connexions with the world to provide what the other lacks.So is there any opportunity that will make a corporate between you and me?Any form of corporation will be appreciated as long as it’s beneficial to the basketball for both of us.The Chinese basketball association and Chinese basketball sports develop center (Exclusively-invested enterprise of CBA) own the most widely resource of Chinese basketball.
As you know the 2008 Olympic-games will open in Beijing,we should take advantage of this chance to improve our basketball.
We hope a good corporative relationship will be established not only during the 2008 Olympic game but also in a long time!
We are looking forward to hear from you soon.
For more detail,please visit the website：www.cba.gov.cn
Best regards
自我感觉水平不怎么样 但是又不知道错在什么地方 请各位大侠指教!
Dear sir or madam:
Thank you for your attention to this letter.This letter is from CBA (Chinese basketball Association) to find any potential opportunities to work with together.
As the authority of Chinese basketball we feel that we have the responsibility to develop this sport in all fields.Besides our effort we also need direct and indirect connexions with the world to provide what the other lacks.So is there any opportunity that will make a corporate between you and me?Any form of corporation will be appreciated as long as it’s beneficial to the basketball for both of us.The Chinese basketball association and Chinese basketball sports develop center (Exclusively-invested enterprise of CBA) own the most widely resource of Chinese basketball.
As you know the 2008 Olympic-games will open in Beijing,we should take advantage of this chance to improve our basketball.
We hope a good corporative relationship will be established not only during the 2008 Olympic game but also in a long time!
We are looking forward to hear from you soon.
For more detail,please visit the website：www.cba.gov.cn
Best regards
Dear sir/madam:
This is a letter from CBA (Chinese basketball Association) to find out if there is any possibility that we work together.
As the ruling body of Chinese basketball,we feel it our mission to develop this sport all-rouneedly.Therefore,we very much want to have a win-win cooperation with other entities,whatever form it may take.The Chinese basketball association and Chinese basketball sports development center (Exclusively-invested enterprise of CBA) boast abundent resources to contribute to our win-win cooperation.
The upcoming 2008 Olympic Games is an occasion not to be missed to promote the sport of basketball.
We hope to cooperate with you during and beyong the upcoming 2008 Olympic Games,an occasion not to be missed to promote the sport of basketball in China and the rest of the world.
We are looking forward to hear from you asap.
For more detail,please visit the website：www.cba.gov.cn
Best regards
This is a letter from CBA (Chinese basketball Association) to find out if there is any possibility that we work together.
As the ruling body of Chinese basketball,we feel it our mission to develop this sport all-rouneedly.Therefore,we very much want to have a win-win cooperation with other entities,whatever form it may take.The Chinese basketball association and Chinese basketball sports development center (Exclusively-invested enterprise of CBA) boast abundent resources to contribute to our win-win cooperation.
The upcoming 2008 Olympic Games is an occasion not to be missed to promote the sport of basketball.
We hope to cooperate with you during and beyong the upcoming 2008 Olympic Games,an occasion not to be missed to promote the sport of basketball in China and the rest of the world.
We are looking forward to hear from you asap.
For more detail,please visit the website：www.cba.gov.cn
Best regards