搜搜考试网请问下面的文章是对的吗?（文章是有关圣诞节的）（比如时态用法是对的吗）
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请问下面的文章是对的吗?（文章是有关圣诞节的）（比如时态用法是对的吗）
In pieces the origin of Christmas on December 25,is the day when christians commemorate the birth of Jesus,known as Christmas.From December 24,in the following January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,all christians held a grand ceremony.Christmas is a Christian holiday originally,because people attention,it has become a national holiday,countries the biggest holiday of the year,can be compared with the New Year,class is like the Spring Festival in China in the west.Westerners with red,green,white tricolor as the Christmas color,Christmas comes every household is decorated with Christmas colors.Red with Christmas flowers and Christmas candles.Green is the Christmas tree.It is the main Christmas decorations,with cut down to Chinese fir,lipper category is the evergreen tree of tower decoration.Hanging above the colorful lights,gifts and paper flowers,also lit Christmas candles.Red and white set each other off becomes an interest is Santa Claus,he is the most popular figure in Christmas activities.Before going to sleep on Christmas Eve,the children want to be in front of the fireplace or put a sock beside a pillow,waiting for Santa Claus to fill it in the gift is put in the socks
In pieces the origin of Christmas on December 25,is the day when christians commemorate the birth of Jesus,known as Christmas.From December 24,in the following January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,all christians held a grand ceremony.Christmas is a Christian holiday originally,because people attention,it has become a national holiday,countries the biggest holiday of the year,can be compared with the New Year,class is like the Spring Festival in China in the west.Westerners with red,green,white tricolor as the Christmas color,Christmas comes every household is decorated with Christmas colors.Red with Christmas flowers and Christmas candles.Green is the Christmas tree.It is the main Christmas decorations,with cut down to Chinese fir,lipper category is the evergreen tree of tower decoration.Hanging above the colorful lights,gifts and paper flowers,also lit Christmas candles.Red and white set each other off becomes an interest is Santa Claus,he is the most popular figure in Christmas activities.Before going to sleep on Christmas Eve,the children want to be in front of the fireplace or put a sock beside a pillow,waiting for Santa Claus to fill it in the gift is put in the socks
有很多词汇生搬硬套的痕迹,有些时候乱用所谓的高级词汇会给人中式英语的感觉,这样还不如用得简单一点词句,实在不行用从句代替也可以