搜搜考试网高一英语作文请求评析改正
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高一英语作文请求评析改正
如果你是李华,你的网友Alee和她的一个好朋友都去了云南地震灾区做志愿者,期间他们吵架了,不知道该怎么办,给你写了一封信,对你讲了这件事,请你给Alee写一封安慰信,并给她提出一些建议.
注意:1.词数120左右 2.可适当发挥想象,使得行文通顺连贯
Dear Li Hua:
I’m sorry to hear from your letter about the problem between you and your friend.
Don’t worry,it is usual to have a quarrel with friends.
This thing doesn’t have wrong and correct.Your friend don’t know your thoughts that she said you are cold.You can talk with her,as a beat friend who care about and think much of you will understand after your talking.Tell her that you are care about the boy’s death that made you unhappy.so you want to leave the earthquake disaster area.Volunteers are warm-hearted and selfless.Believe me,if she is your best friend and a good volunteer,and she will support your decision.
I hope you can solve your problem soon and happy every day.
如果你是李华,你的网友Alee和她的一个好朋友都去了云南地震灾区做志愿者,期间他们吵架了,不知道该怎么办,给你写了一封信,对你讲了这件事,请你给Alee写一封安慰信,并给她提出一些建议.
注意:1.词数120左右 2.可适当发挥想象,使得行文通顺连贯
Dear Li Hua:
I’m sorry to hear from your letter about the problem between you and your friend.
Don’t worry,it is usual to have a quarrel with friends.
This thing doesn’t have wrong and correct.Your friend don’t know your thoughts that she said you are cold.You can talk with her,as a beat friend who care about and think much of you will understand after your talking.Tell her that you are care about the boy’s death that made you unhappy.so you want to leave the earthquake disaster area.Volunteers are warm-hearted and selfless.Believe me,if she is your best friend and a good volunteer,and she will support your decision.
I hope you can solve your problem soon and happy every day.
我就把错误都改出来吧
第一句,听你的信?而且sorry for doing或Sth.你就写sorry for the relationship between your freind and you( you要放后面）.把usual改common或者normal
第二段第一句改Every coin has two sides就更好了（就是事情都有两面性,没有谁对谁错）
thoughts后面的that改and.care前面的are去掉,care 是V.再把death后面的that改and
hope+that 或者hope to do
happy前+be
这些错误都改下会好点,但是没有实质性的安慰.你可以让那人冷静下来思考下到底是谁对谁错,最好是让她想想自己有没有问题,然后如果有就去道歉,没有就去和对方明讲.
我教学生写作文的大致思路就是这样.然后语法你自己再看看 有些地方可以避免的
第一句,听你的信?而且sorry for doing或Sth.你就写sorry for the relationship between your freind and you( you要放后面）.把usual改common或者normal
第二段第一句改Every coin has two sides就更好了（就是事情都有两面性,没有谁对谁错）
thoughts后面的that改and.care前面的are去掉,care 是V.再把death后面的that改and
hope+that 或者hope to do
happy前+be
这些错误都改下会好点,但是没有实质性的安慰.你可以让那人冷静下来思考下到底是谁对谁错,最好是让她想想自己有没有问题,然后如果有就去道歉,没有就去和对方明讲.
我教学生写作文的大致思路就是这样.然后语法你自己再看看 有些地方可以避免的