搜搜考试网求英语大神改语法错误!英语大神快现身!
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求英语大神改语法错误!英语大神快现身!
1The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcastic and I’m crazy about it.（总感觉不是很连贯,怎么改更好捏）
2The protagonist,Sam’s parents died when he was a baby and he led a free life with his sister and her husband David,a blacksmith who takesPip on as an apprentice and taught him his trade.（这句语法绝对有问题的.大神可不可以顺带下那种逗号逗号好多逗号的句子怎么用捏）
3The soft things had came back to his heart already and he became an average person again.（总想用逗号逗号的句子可是不知道怎么用）
4 Compared with those heroes’,Sam’s biography is more close to life.(with those heroes’这里感觉有问题.)
大神可不可以顺带下那种逗号逗号好多逗号的句子怎么用捏,比如说（.where Jossi,Sam's young lady,and her old father,lived.还有比如Whenever it will be safe to get him on board a foreign ship,there he would be,all ready ,down by the river.）这两句都用了好多逗号,平时该怎么用捏
重点是怎么用哈~
重点是怎么用哈~那种很多逗号的说
1The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcastic and I’m crazy about it.（总感觉不是很连贯,怎么改更好捏）
2The protagonist,Sam’s parents died when he was a baby and he led a free life with his sister and her husband David,a blacksmith who takesPip on as an apprentice and taught him his trade.（这句语法绝对有问题的.大神可不可以顺带下那种逗号逗号好多逗号的句子怎么用捏）
3The soft things had came back to his heart already and he became an average person again.（总想用逗号逗号的句子可是不知道怎么用）
4 Compared with those heroes’,Sam’s biography is more close to life.(with those heroes’这里感觉有问题.)
大神可不可以顺带下那种逗号逗号好多逗号的句子怎么用捏,比如说（.where Jossi,Sam's young lady,and her old father,lived.还有比如Whenever it will be safe to get him on board a foreign ship,there he would be,all ready ,down by the river.）这两句都用了好多逗号,平时该怎么用捏
重点是怎么用哈~
重点是怎么用哈~那种很多逗号的说
What makes me crazy is that the title 'XXX' features a sense of irony.
绝对没有问题
He,whose heart the soft things had already came back to,became an average person again.
没有问题
关于好多逗号的句子,就是写的时候要把某个的属性以及行为分清主次,把主当成朱据部分,次要的都变成逗号和从句.很随意的.
再问： 麻烦把我原句中的错误也找出来吧，属于那种错误捏 谢谢了
再答： 重新申明4个句子都没有错误
The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcastic and I’m crazy about it.有一种...感觉 常用 a sense of，例如 幽默感=a sense of humor，但是a tune of在此处更好，也是对的；named 多余
这个句子没有闪光点，it代指前面的句子，想到这里，你是不是有一种想用从句的冲动，是的，可以用表语从句，同位语从句，定语从句What makes me crazy is that the title 'XXX' features a sense of irony.(表语从句)I’m crazy about it that the title ‘xxx’ has a tone of irony.(同位语从句)The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcasticalness,which makes me crazy.(定语从句)这个句子用了两次同位语使得这个并列句显得复杂The soft things had came back to his heart already and he became an average person again.有多个句子的时候，如果他们之间有一丝联系就可以把它写成一个句子。况且上面的两个句子是有因果关系的......where Jossi,Sam's young lady,and her old father, lived.Sam's young lady做的是同位语，就是一个人有多重身份，插入时用逗号连接两边；
Whenever it will be safe to get him on board a foreign ship, there he would be, all ready ,down by the river.all ready做的是主语补足语，修饰的是he
绝对没有问题
He,whose heart the soft things had already came back to,became an average person again.
没有问题
关于好多逗号的句子,就是写的时候要把某个的属性以及行为分清主次,把主当成朱据部分,次要的都变成逗号和从句.很随意的.
再问： 麻烦把我原句中的错误也找出来吧，属于那种错误捏 谢谢了
再答： 重新申明4个句子都没有错误
The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcastic and I’m crazy about it.有一种...感觉 常用 a sense of，例如 幽默感=a sense of humor，但是a tune of在此处更好，也是对的；named 多余
这个句子没有闪光点，it代指前面的句子，想到这里，你是不是有一种想用从句的冲动，是的，可以用表语从句，同位语从句，定语从句What makes me crazy is that the title 'XXX' features a sense of irony.(表语从句)I’m crazy about it that the title ‘xxx’ has a tone of irony.(同位语从句)The title named ‘xxx’ has a tone of sarcasticalness,which makes me crazy.(定语从句)这个句子用了两次同位语使得这个并列句显得复杂The soft things had came back to his heart already and he became an average person again.有多个句子的时候，如果他们之间有一丝联系就可以把它写成一个句子。况且上面的两个句子是有因果关系的......where Jossi,Sam's young lady,and her old father, lived.Sam's young lady做的是同位语，就是一个人有多重身份，插入时用逗号连接两边；
Whenever it will be safe to get him on board a foreign ship, there he would be, all ready ,down by the river.all ready做的是主语补足语，修饰的是he