搜搜考试网此作文满分10分 我能得多少?
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此作文满分10分 我能得多少?
Dear Maria,
Thank you very much for hope I join your birthday party.But my father and mother are out on business.They are going to come back home next month.And my grandfather fell ill.He stay in bed.So I have to take care of him.And I must study for the coming mid-term exam.I can't join your birthday party.I'm very sorry.I just write E-mail to you.
Happy birthday to you!
Yours
Liu Ying
Dear Maria,
Thank you very much for hope I join your birthday party.But my father and mother are out on business.They are going to come back home next month.And my grandfather fell ill.He stay in bed.So I have to take care of him.And I must study for the coming mid-term exam.I can't join your birthday party.I'm very sorry.I just write E-mail to you.
Happy birthday to you!
Yours
Liu Ying
for hope ==>for hoping
They are going to come back home next month
==>They are coming back home next month
He stay in bed
==>He stayed in bed
I just write E-mail to you
==>I just write to you.
/I just send the E-mail to you
时态,句式都不是很好,但是作为鼓励,给你七分,可能你们老师给你六分
They are going to come back home next month
==>They are coming back home next month
He stay in bed
==>He stayed in bed
I just write E-mail to you
==>I just write to you.
/I just send the E-mail to you
时态,句式都不是很好,但是作为鼓励,给你七分,可能你们老师给你六分