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One day. I want to buy something. So I took a bus to the shopping. When I was sitting in the bus, I saw an old lady getting on. I stood up at one and offered my seat to her.. The old lady sat down happily and thanked me . when the bus stoop in front of the shopping. I got off and waved goodbye to her.

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补充:When the bus stop was in front of the shopping place . I got off and waved goodbye to her.
最终答案：略

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