搜搜考试网英语高手来帮我看看有没有什么错误.、.1
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英语高手来帮我看看有没有什么错误.、.1
XX High School has a long and ancient history.Her 30th birthday is just around the corner.Her ideas about running a school is to teach students not only learn knowledge,but also learn how to be a good person.
XX High School has a long and ancient history.Her 30th birthday is just around the corner.Her ideas about running a school is to teach students not only learn knowledge,but also learn how to be a good person.
错误有好几处.
以下是我改的
XX hight school has a long history.Its 30th birthday is around the corner.Its leitmotiv about running a school is to teach students who should not only learn knowledge,but also learn how to be a good person.
某某高中有着悠久的历史.它的三十岁生日即将到来.它的教学宗旨是不仅教学生知识,还要教他们如何做人.
其中,a long就表示很长时间了,不需要再有ancient,这里是个重复.另外学校毕竟是个机构,属于物,最好改为it,所有格its.还有ideas一般表示主意,主旨宗旨之类的还是不要用它为好.
一点建议,
以下是我改的
XX hight school has a long history.Its 30th birthday is around the corner.Its leitmotiv about running a school is to teach students who should not only learn knowledge,but also learn how to be a good person.
某某高中有着悠久的历史.它的三十岁生日即将到来.它的教学宗旨是不仅教学生知识,还要教他们如何做人.
其中,a long就表示很长时间了,不需要再有ancient,这里是个重复.另外学校毕竟是个机构,属于物,最好改为it,所有格its.还有ideas一般表示主意,主旨宗旨之类的还是不要用它为好.
一点建议,