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哪位英语高人帮忙看看这语法对么!急!

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哪位英语高人帮忙看看这语法对么!急!
As a Chinese college students, I cherish this internship activities. At the same time, I think, there are three reasons that I can be competent for this job.
First, I have enough self-confidence, I think that no matter what you do, has the self-confidence, have the confidence to oneself can better finish the job. Second, I have enough sense of responsibility and team cooperation spirit and responsibility will be prompted me to finish their tasks, team spirit is I can better into colleagues, and we can work together. Third, I have rich imagination and innovation ability, any work I would put his whole heart into it.
Thank you!
哪位英语高人帮忙看看这语法对么!急!
确实有不少语法问题,有些表达也罗嗦,标点也欠规范.我修改如下:
As a Chinese college student,I cherish this internship.At the same time,I think I am competent for the job.Here is why.
In the first place,I have self-confidence.I believe that one can achieve whatever one does with self-confidence.Besides,I have a strong sense of responsibility and a good team work spirit.With a sense of responsibility,I will surely have a strong motive power to perform well in my job,and with team work spirit,I can cooperate well with my colleagues,which will also ensure the success of my job.What's more,I have rich imagination and innovation ability,and this will greatly enhance the efficiency of my work.
With all these qualifications,I believe I will make an excellent intern in your...(我不能十分确定你是否要去医院做intern,如是,那么此处用in your hospital).
Thank you!