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解题思路： Dear Sir, Mr Smith, my name is Lihua , who is a student from Hepin Middle School in Tianjing. It is reported on the internet that a summer camp is going to be held in Hongkong by an international organization. And the students from different countries will be admitted. Thus, I feel it much honour if I can join in. I am an optimistic boy and I am fond of making friends with different people. I don't even feel nervious when I am communicating with strangers . What is more, Iam good
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Dear Sir,
Mr Smith, my name is Lihua , who is a student from Hepin Middle School in Tianjing. It is reported on the internet that a summer camp is going to be held in Hongkong by an international organization. And
the students from different countries will be admitted. Thus, I feel it much honour if I can join in.
I am an optimistic boy and I am fond of making friends with different people. I don't even feel nervious when I am communicating with strangers . What is more, Iam good at speaking English and recently I have got a medal in an English speech competition. So I am eager to have many chances to talk with foreigners.
In my opinion, we can be more familiar with western cultures In Hongkong, let alone others, for Hongkong is an international city. It follows that I can know a lot in the camp.
The camp is so beneficial that I have a strong desire to join in.Could you offer me such a good chance? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua