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This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camp.We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains.We set up our tents on the sandy beach,and when night fall,we started a fire to give us light and kept us warm.All my classmates sat around them,talking,sang and laughing.Several hours late,Robert and i went back to the tent to have a chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a lot of in common.For example,we all like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics.The fite and stars saw our happiness.What i wished time would stop at the moment!
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This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camping .We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains .We set up our tents on the sandy beach,and when night fell,we started a fire to give us light and keep us warm.All my classmates sat around them,talking,singing and laughing.Several hours later, Robert and I went back to the tent to have a chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a lot （of去掉） in common.For example,we both like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics.The fire and stars saw our happiness.How I wished time would stop at the moment!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camping .We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains .We set up our tents on the sandy beach,and when night fell,we started a fire to give us light and keep us warm.All my classmates sat around them,talking,singing and laughing.Several hours later, Robert and I went back to the tent to have a chat.We stayed up all night.We found that we two had a lot （of去掉） in common.For example,we both like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics.The fire and stars saw our happiness.How I wished time would stop at the moment!
最终答案：略