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帮忙修改一段英语Im don’t in favor of this school uniform.The student

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帮忙修改一段英语
Im don’t in favor of this school uniform.The student in this school uniform is kept watch on like prisoner.The student can’t form the habit of consciousness in this situation.Many of student abide by discipline,the situation such as being late,being absent from school,acquit onself ill in class don’t often show-up.Even if it happen we should education or not enforce.Students should grow up in environment of freedom and healthy.
I don’t like the kind of shool uniform.In fact,my ideal school uniform is sports shirt and slacks.I think my ideal school makes everyone sporty.Although it say hi-tech uniform doesn’t affect our normal study,We should have our own private lives.This uniform attacked our privatition,So I dislike it.
帮忙修改一段英语Im don’t in favor of this school uniform.The student
I don't like the uniform of this school.Students who wear uniforms just like prisoners,a nd it's hard for them to be self-conscious students,and most of them have to abide by disciplines.(the situation such as being late, being absent from school, acquit onself ill in class don’t often show-up) 这个句子是不是缺少了后果的部分? 你只说了这种行为而没说带来的后果.所以这样是没办法接下去的.Even if it happen we should education or not enforce: 这句可以理解成很多意思,也许你给中文会比较好给你修改.
We should have our own private lives: 校服本身不会干扰到你的私人生活,所以你可以说:we should have our own idea about our clothing. This uniform attacked our privatition 校服攻击了你的什么? 最好把中文发出来吧