帮我写篇英语作文以下是作文题目："In order to be the really great, instead of

帮我写篇英语作文
以下是作文题目：
"In order to be the really great, instead of the merely very good, one has to be focused." What is your view? Use evidence to support your argument. Reference must be provided if any.
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Difference between good and great
Many people want to be a great person. This is not only a dream for great people , but also a dream for the ordinary. In order to have a best possition in the sociaty, what we should do is to be focused.
Here are some examples in the long history of science .
Albert Einstan's great achievement had been discovered when he was just 20s years old ,working as a employer in a research collage. He has already t6hought of his great ideas of relativity, and in the same time , he printed to the magazines. However , it wasn't a hit .Because nobody understood him . Deprssed it is ,but Einstan did't give up. He continued to focu on his reasearch ,until secceed.
Here we can make a conclusion that he is seccessful because he never give up when in trouble, and also he is always focused to his theary and his devoted belief.
Another example is Mary courier . As we all know, she was a great scientist who won Noble prize two times . Her seccess is all about her focuse on sciece and her hard work until death.
So it is to say that if we want to reach the top of something , what we must do is to focused on it . Not just be good , but to be the best need this spirit .
Be focused on what you really care about , and in this way can you acvhieve your dream sooner or later.