英语作文修改请补充题目,并合并成高级句式,稍作修改Telling lies are used to have bad r

英语作文修改
请补充题目,并合并成高级句式,稍作修改
Telling lies are used to have bad reputation.However,it is true that we live in a world where
lies are given every day.Teachers beautify the performance of their students
to encourage confidence.Doctors hide the truth of the illness to keep their
patients optimistic.Lovers tell sweet words to keep intimate relationship.
Because of the beautiful lies,I am deeply touched by the story in which a
painter drew a leaf everyday outside his window to raise hope of a terminally
ill patient.
Sometimes
telling lies help us to deal with tough things and get another opportunity to
make it better.Therefore,whether it is good to tell lies cannot be easily
concluded by a definite answer.Instead,it should be judged by its motivation.
As a high
school student,the instruction of our teacher and the anticipation of our
parents give me great pressure.When I did not perform quite well in the test,
sometimes I told a lie to avoid letting them down.However,as I felt ashamed
and uneasy about it,I would be stimulated to study harder,waiting for the
next opportunity to prove my ability.
Followed by
the same standard,when I am cheated,I persuade myself to calm down and think
about the motivation of his lies.If it is forgivable,I chose to accept and
give him another chance.
A well-known
study shows that an ordinary person tells three lies one day.Whether you like
it or not,lies are given everywhere and every day.So,I would rather enjoy it
than live as a hypocrite.Telling white lies in a necessary time and a well-meaning
way,our living world is more diverse; our lives are more interesting,full of surpriseand possibilities.

您这一篇文章语句通顺,少有语法错误,而且内容很实在,用词到位.本人认为并不需要做过多修改,您完全可以对您自己有信心.您并不需要苛求高级句式,有时候高级句式反而会让人混淆,您这篇文章的文风已经很好了,力求简单简洁,清楚明了,这样的文章是非常有效,令人印象深刻的.我建议您在开头或者是结尾的时候,引用名人名言,然后用一两局比较高级的句型就足够了.有一句要指出：If it is forgivable,I WILL choose to accept and give him another chance.这里主句要用将来时还不是过去时.