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有一篇英语作文,麻烦大家看一下有没有错
My Trip to Canada
I went to Canada by air with my classmate on June.5th,we take almost 14 hours on the airplane.On the airplane,I sat with Amanda,we play games and do many things together.the food on the plane is just so-so.In our home stay,Jenny,Seralina,Helen and me,live together,we do many funny things.We went to many places,just like:Gas town,a flower Garden and so on.It’s very strange,when we take the airplane to Shanghai,I sat whit Amanda again,we are very happy.
My Trip to Canada
I went to Canada by air with my classmate on June.5th,we take almost 14 hours on the airplane.On the airplane,I sat with Amanda,we play games and do many things together.the food on the plane is just so-so.In our home stay,Jenny,Seralina,Helen and me,live together,we do many funny things.We went to many places,just like:Gas town,a flower Garden and so on.It’s very strange,when we take the airplane to Shanghai,I sat whit Amanda again,we are very happy.
第一句by air我觉得应该放在 with my classmate 后面.不应是take 是took 是过去时.是we played games,and did many things together.lived together.,we did many funny things.还有It’very strange是指什么.需要说明.是took the airplane to Shanghai,with
we were very happy
we were very happy