帮我看看是否有错误.Alittle dog walked in the fields,it left a piece o

帮我看看是否有错误.
Alittle dog walked in the fields,it left a piece of shit inthe dirt road,the Duo Kip wasborn!
TheDuo Kip opened his eyes,like a little doll like everythingaround themand praise:"Wow -" everything is so fresh and lovely,Wonderfull Life seemsimminent.
But the birdflew look at it,and said"it is dog shit",from the Duo Kip near apool of mud also makefun of to say "dog shit is a stool the worst of all".The Duo Kip very upset,"wow”cried out.
Mud uncle saw the Duo Kip cry,comfort it said:"God created you,will let you useful."TheDuo Kip unsuspectingly to mud uncle about its story:This is a piece offertile soil from,the original has been happy to cultivate crops,has recently been dug out,it wasglad he will be used to build the warm house.But it is accidentally transported from the earth ox cart down,not cultivatingcrops can not build the house,had no choice but to wait for the cart again after,put it onthe flat crush.Fortunately,after saying these words,the farmers found the soil,put it away.The soil towards shouting dog shit:"child,you will be useful!"
"But I am just a pile of dog shit,I can have what use?" The DuoKip motion lesson the dirt road,day in and day out,no one found it.Autumn has passed,the wind waves,night more desolate country road.Thinking about the blue dogshit sad heart,heard a gentle voice:"darling,don't be sad,you are better than me......"

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