简历作好但是里面应该有很多语法和用词的不当,

简历作好但是里面应该有很多语法和用词的不当,
小丫头在此感激不仅~内容如下
Comments
Around two years manager assistant work,acquainting with the company personnel and the administration workflows,have the good adaptability and well-trained communication techniques.
Be good at carrying on the social intercourse activity more,even have the organization experience of various literature activity;
Can make use of various function office daily pursuit carry on efficiently masterly.
Oneself the work is earnest and is responsible for meticulous,and have the very strong responsibility and spirit of enterprises.
Work experience
May.2006-present:Shanghai JunYiGolf Club
Responsibility:
◇ Be responsible for the company processing of the usual administration business
◇ Be responsible for the cooperation talks that ground cooperates the seller
◇ Be responsible for the company personal management
◇ Help the coordination work that the general manager works well each section of company
Fbe.2005-May.2006:shanghai tuoke intelligent instrument co.,ltd
◇ Help the coordination work that the general manager works well each section of company
◇ The company produces the planned arrangement
◇ Be responsible for the preparation work of the company quantity management system attestation data
◇ Be responsible for the company 2005 Chinese electronics instrument appearance exposition join the exhibition of prepare and plan and organize work
The character evaluation
◇ Self-confident,like to challenge
◇ Study the ability strong,can control the new knowledge in the in a short time
◇ Have the excellent communication and moderate the ability

Comments
Around two years manager assistant work, acquainting with the company personnel and the administration workflows, have the good adaptability and well-trained communication techniques.
Be good at carrying on the social intercourse activity more, even have the organization experience of various literature activity;
Can make use of various function office daily pursuit carry on efficiently masterly.
Oneself the work is earnest and is responsible for meticulous, and have the very strong responsibility and spirit of enterprises.
Work experience
May.2006-present:Shanghai JunYiGolf Club
Responsibility:
◇ Be responsible for the company processing of the usual administration business
◇ Be responsible for the cooperation talks that ground cooperates the seller
◇ Be responsible for the company personal management
◇ Help the coordination work that the general manager works well each section of company
Fbe.2005-May.2006:shanghai tuoke intelligent instrument co.,ltd
◇ Help the coordination work that the general manager works well each section of company
◇ The company produces the planned arrangement
◇ Be responsible for the preparation work of the company quantity management system attestation data
◇ Be responsible for the company 2005 Chinese electronics instrument appearance exposition join the exhibition of prepare and plan and organize work
The character evaluation
◇ Self-confident, like to challenge
◇ Study the ability strong, can control the new knowledge in the in a short time
◇ Have the excellent communication and moderate the ability