搜搜考试网求救英语达人帮我看一下这面这篇自我介绍有没有错误的地方,
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求救英语达人帮我看一下这面这篇自我介绍有没有错误的地方,
Leaders,Members:
Hello,everybody!
My name is Li Na,My English name is Amy.
from Hebei province,
I am cheerful,honest,easy to get along with others; likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family,where not only provided me with
a growth exercise,showing a good platform for self,but also for giving me the
chance to meet more new colleagues,new friends.- To take,I am very grateful
to all the leaders,thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn,but also hope in future we can work great weekend!
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding,we will not only become a career go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades,life will be like-minded,woe
friend.
Finally,I would like and we can work
together for our common cause and work hard!dedecms.comThanks everyone!
Leaders,Members:
Hello,everybody!
My name is Li Na,My English name is Amy.
from Hebei province,
I am cheerful,honest,easy to get along with others; likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family,where not only provided me with
a growth exercise,showing a good platform for self,but also for giving me the
chance to meet more new colleagues,new friends.- To take,I am very grateful
to all the leaders,thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn,but also hope in future we can work great weekend!
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding,we will not only become a career go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades,life will be like-minded,woe
friend.
Finally,I would like and we can work
together for our common cause and work hard!dedecms.comThanks everyone!
修改如下 注：括号内为修改内容
(dear) Leaders,Members:
Hello,everybody!
My name is Li Na,My English name is Amy.
(I come) from Hebei province(.)
I am cheerful,honest,(and )easy to get along with others(.)(Also,I)likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family,where not only provided me with
a growth exercise,showing a good platform for (me),but also (gave) me the
chance to meet more new colleagues,new friends.(To be honest,) I am very grateful
to all the leaders,thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn(.)(But I) also hope in future we can work( well together!)
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding,we will not only become （friends who）go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades,(also )like-minded,woe
friend(s).
Finally,I (sinserely hope that)we can work
together for our common cause and work hard!dedecms.comThanks everyone!
冒昧问一句,您是自己写的还是翻译器翻译的?
怎么怪怪的.可能是我懂的不多,所以部分看不懂的以及语法不通的地方稍作改动.
(dear) Leaders,Members:
Hello,everybody!
My name is Li Na,My English name is Amy.
(I come) from Hebei province(.)
I am cheerful,honest,(and )easy to get along with others(.)(Also,I)likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family,where not only provided me with
a growth exercise,showing a good platform for (me),but also (gave) me the
chance to meet more new colleagues,new friends.(To be honest,) I am very grateful
to all the leaders,thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn(.)(But I) also hope in future we can work( well together!)
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding,we will not only become （friends who）go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades,(also )like-minded,woe
friend(s).
Finally,I (sinserely hope that)we can work
together for our common cause and work hard!dedecms.comThanks everyone!
冒昧问一句,您是自己写的还是翻译器翻译的?
怎么怪怪的.可能是我懂的不多,所以部分看不懂的以及语法不通的地方稍作改动.