搜搜考试网初一小短文,帮我改错.
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初一小短文,帮我改错.
如下：
Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .
It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park .
We went shoping at the big supermarket
But too tired and we didn't go to play
We had a good time .
And hope you can go to GangZhou one day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .
如下：
Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .
It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park .
We went shoping at the big supermarket
But too tired and we didn't go to play
We had a good time .
And hope you can go to GangZhou one day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .
Hello!everyone !I'm on duty today .
Today is Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We had went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park and went shoping at the big supermarket
But I felt too tired to go to play
We had a good time .
So hope you will go to GangZhou some day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .
Today is Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We had went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park and went shoping at the big supermarket
But I felt too tired to go to play
We had a good time .
So hope you will go to GangZhou some day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .