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下面是我用英语写得短文,希望有人纠错.明天要给老师检查的.我希望能表达我的意思就可以了.

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下面是我用英语写得短文,希望有人纠错.明天要给老师检查的.我希望能表达我的意思就可以了.
she told me:"anytime anywhere study"
what are you doing.
gameing.
so.
laugh in she and me.
I would like to say something.
i don't know say what.
i'm affraid lose face.
but i need it
today.
i went in a group.
"who's my people." it's me go in group say .
"me."the gril said
i feel great.
she not understand i mean.
learn english a girl you Cannot injury .
The day before yesterday .
i scold my friend.
she didn't ask me why.
Me guess I lost her
下面是我用英语写得短文,希望有人纠错.明天要给老师检查的.我希望能表达我的意思就可以了.
你这错也太多了吧,完全是中文式的.
再问: 是啊,搞不好老师要请家长啦,帮帮忙啦
再答: 实在是太离谱了,要改都得面目全非了
再问: 那。。。。。。不是玩玩了啊。 我怕你写得我看不懂。 那你写好了追加10分给你。 就是:姐姐告诉我:我每时每刻都想学习。 我问她你在干嘛。她说打游戏。 然后我就笑了。 今天我进了一个英语学习群,然后问谁是我的女朋友。 有一个MM立马跳出来说我。 我心如鹿撞。非常激动。 然后觉得学英语的女孩伤不起啊。 前天 我骂了一个朋友, 她没有问我为什么, 我想我失去这个朋友了。 这就是我想写的东西
再答: 没问题
再问: 哥 我在线等啊,今天就要交了啊
再答: My sister told me: I want to learn all the time. I asked her what were you doing. She said that she was playing the game, then I laughed. Today I entered a group of English language learning, and then I asked :"who is my girlfriend." suddenly,There was a girl who answered me. My heart beat so powerful and I feel Very excited. Then I think the girls who learn English is so great. The day before yesterday,I screwed one of my friends,she didn't ask the reason.I thought I had lost the friend.