大学英语比较好的来帮下忙 直接把完善或者改正过的句子回复出来

大学英语比较好的来帮下忙 直接把完善或者改正过的句子回复出来
,一个修改一个改错
一 Sentence revise
1.Character building begins in our infancy,and it continues until death.（Simple sentence）
2.He hasn’t got much experience of teaching children.He’s patient and keen to learn.(compound sentence).
3.The enemy ran away as soon as they saw our flag.(simple sentence)
4.A child’s life is like a piece of paper.On it every passerby leaves a mark.(complex sentence)
5.The world is full of wonders.Some of them we don’t discover until we’re all grown-up.(compound complex sentence).
6.A high mountain stands in the east.A large river flows in the west.（compound sentence）
7.They say a person needs just three things to be truly happy in this world.He needs someone to love.He needs something to do and something to hope for.(parallel structure).
8.At last my wish is realized.The government has granted me permission to go to the West.(complex sentence)
9.He learned how to categorize and draw animals accurately.(parallel structure)
10.The store had the outdoor grill I wanted.The clerk wouldn’t sell it to me.It was the food sample.(compound-complex sentence)
11.The store had the outdoor grill I wanted.The clerk wouldn’t sell it to me.It was the food sample.(compound-complex sentence)
12.I sat in the front row,but I did not get his words.( compound-complex sentence)
13.China’s economic boom is sucking in commodities like soy beans and steel.Brazil is a major exporter.(complex sentence)
14.The Irish ambassador bid us farewell when the party ended.(simple sentence)
15.I have a digital camera,but I don’t know how to use it properly.(compound complex sentence)
16.Former American president,Ronald Reagon,died at the age of 83.He was the oldest president in American history.(long sentence)
17.We don’t dare to eat these vegetables.They are seriously polluted by insecticides.(compound sentenced)
18.The clod gets longer and gets closer to the ground.It begins to pull up dirt from the ground.(complex sentence)
二 Sentence correction：
1.A brother may not be a friend,a friend will always be a brother.
2.To keep the girl students interested in getting in shape,an exercise program was set up for the summer months.
3.Speaking before a group of examiners,the girl’s knees shook badly.
4.The article is difficult to understand not because the vocabulary is technical but because of the complicated sentence structure．
5.Daisy was an adult,married,and had a young daughter.
6.Our teacher showed us how to create e-cards on the computer with an encouraging smile.
7.She paid five dollars for a dress at the county fair that she wanted.
8.We should budget carefully.Even though our incomce has been greatly increasing.
9.For a person born in New Zealand,it is natural to enjoy eating roast lamb.
10.We hoped to pass the exams by doing lots of revision and studying.
直接把完善后的或者改正过的句子贴出来就行，答的好的，可以再追加分数，

一 Sentence revise
1.Character building exists from our infancy until death.（Simple sentence）
2.He hasn’t got much experience of teaching children but he’s patient and keen to learn.(compound sentence).
3.The enemy ran away to see our flag.(simple sentence)
4.A child’s life is like a piece of paper,on which every passerby leaves a mark.(complex sentence)
5.The world is full of wonders and some of which we don’t discover until we’re all grown-up.(compound complex sentence).
6.A high mountain stands in the east and a large river flows in the west.（compound sentence）
7.They say a person needs just three things to be truly happy in this world.He needs someone to love.He needs something to do and he needs something to hope for.(parallel structure).
8.At last my wish is realized for the government has granted me permission to go to the West.(complex sentence)
9.He learned how to categorize and how to draw animals accurately.(parallel structure)
10.The store had the outdoor grill I wanted but the clerk wouldn’t sell it to me,which was the food sample.(compound-complex sentence)
11.同上
12.I sat in the front row,and because of which I did not get his words.( compound-complex sentence)
13.China’s economic boom is sucking in commodities like soy beans and steel with Brazil to be a major exporter.(complex sentence）
14.The Irish ambassador bid us farewell to end the party.(simple sentence)
15.I have a digital camera,but it is the article that I don’t know how to use properly.(compound complex sentence)
16.Former American president,Ronald Reagon,died at the age of 83,who was the oldest president in American history.(long sentence)
17.We don’t dare to eat these vegetables because/for they are seriously polluted by insecticides.(compound sentenced)
18.The clod gets longer and gets closer to the ground which begins to pull up dirt from the ground.(complex sentence)
二 Sentence correction：
1.A brother may not be a friend,but a friend will always be a brother.
2.To keep the girl students interested in getting in shape,an exercise program was set up in the summer months.
3.Speaking in front of a group of examiners,the girl’s knees shook badly.
4.The article is difficult to understand not because the vocabulary is technical but because the sentence structure is complicated．
5.Daisy was an adult,married,and she had a young daughter.
6.With an encouraging smile,our teacher showed us how to create e-cards on the computer .
7.She paid five dollars for a dress that she wanted at the county fair.
8.We should budget carefully,even though our incomce has been greatly increased.
9.For a person born in New Zealand,it is natural for him or she to enjoy eating roast lamb.
10.We are hoped to pass the exams by doing lots of revision and studying.
2,6,10不确定