搜搜考试网作文修改~~详细~~
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老师，您修改时看能不能在加些句子~~谢谢啦~~ Dear Mr,Black : Thank you very much . I want to tell you again. I'm very excited when I hear about someone want to help I and my little brother to come back school. The books and money that you give me has been received. This term our achievement get ahead,and we will not work hard until go into the university. we want to meet you very much , but I know It's impossible . so I hope received your photo soon . LingMing
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Dear Mr Black ,
Thank you very much for your help . We are more thankful than we can express.
I was very excited when I heard that someone wanted to help my little brother and me to come back to school.
The books and money that you gave us has been received. This term we did very well at school ,and we will work hard all the time until we go into the university.
We want to meet you very much , but I know you are very busy . so I hope to receive your photo soon .
LingMing
整体内容连贯。个别地方表达不够充分。
最终答案：略
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Dear Mr Black ,
Thank you very much for your help . We are more thankful than we can express.
I was very excited when I heard that someone wanted to help my little brother and me to come back to school.
The books and money that you gave us has been received. This term we did very well at school ,and we will work hard all the time until we go into the university.
We want to meet you very much , but I know you are very busy . so I hope to receive your photo soon .
LingMing
整体内容连贯。个别地方表达不够充分。
最终答案：略