搜搜考试网求大神帮忙修改英语Essay
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求大神帮忙修改英语Essay
While we were parking in the lot which belongs to the Asia Pacific Museum,there is colorful graffiti on the wall.I saw the elegant stone entrance when we were walking along with the quiet street.You could see the courtyard garden inside through the entrance,the first room we were entered is the reception area which is situated on the left side of the passageway.Various and well-printed guidebooks were laying on the counter,we started our museum tour after paying the tickets.I was surprised by the indoor area,which is large although you could not image from the outside,the rooms were connected one by one.
While we were parking in the lot which belongs to the Asia Pacific Museum,there is colorful graffiti on the wall.I saw the elegant stone entrance when we were walking along with the quiet street.You could see the courtyard garden inside through the entrance,the first room we were entered is the reception area which is situated on the left side of the passageway.Various and well-printed guidebooks were laying on the counter,we started our museum tour after paying the tickets.I was surprised by the indoor area,which is large although you could not image from the outside,the rooms were connected one by one.
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再问： QAQ因为太长了全文发不上了，不知道用什么办法可以全部发上来的说
再答： 是像游记一样的嘛？ 关于博物馆的。 你想写pass tense的话一定要全文统一。 第一句话你想要用过去进行时可以写 While we were parking in the parking lot(只写lot可能unclear） near the Asia Pacific Museum, there was (统一tense） a colorful graffiti on the wall. 然后下一句我不确定walking along 后面用 with 但是保险一点的话还是on the quiet street比较好。 还有其实英文essay中最好不要direct to the readers， 比如用you什么什么什么。 而且读者随着你的视角在参观，所以直接you could see 不太好。可以说 there was a courtyard garden 或者 Along the sidewalk, there was 什么什么什么 然后 which is situated on the left side of the sidewalk. 然后guidebook你是想说地图什么的在前台的东西对吧。 可以用点别的形容词因为well printed 也不是不可以但是可以改 well organized printed guidebooks were laying on the counter desk. 然后 we started 要下一句话。或者刚才那句之间加分号; 再下面 surprised by the indoor area，which WAS 这里还是要一样的tense. 然后这句话可以改成 which was huge and you could not even image just by looking from the outside.
再问： 神呐！！你有没有空，我这边文章发不全...你有空的话帮我一下吧QAQ用QQ也好用什么也好...拜托了
再答： 好吧亲。。回头多给点分把哈哈哈~ +Q 278652967 话说你最好一段一段发。。不然看着眼晕 我给你改完再发下一段把
再问： QAQ因为太长了全文发不上了，不知道用什么办法可以全部发上来的说
再答： 是像游记一样的嘛？ 关于博物馆的。 你想写pass tense的话一定要全文统一。 第一句话你想要用过去进行时可以写 While we were parking in the parking lot(只写lot可能unclear） near the Asia Pacific Museum, there was (统一tense） a colorful graffiti on the wall. 然后下一句我不确定walking along 后面用 with 但是保险一点的话还是on the quiet street比较好。 还有其实英文essay中最好不要direct to the readers， 比如用you什么什么什么。 而且读者随着你的视角在参观，所以直接you could see 不太好。可以说 there was a courtyard garden 或者 Along the sidewalk, there was 什么什么什么 然后 which is situated on the left side of the sidewalk. 然后guidebook你是想说地图什么的在前台的东西对吧。 可以用点别的形容词因为well printed 也不是不可以但是可以改 well organized printed guidebooks were laying on the counter desk. 然后 we started 要下一句话。或者刚才那句之间加分号; 再下面 surprised by the indoor area，which WAS 这里还是要一样的tense. 然后这句话可以改成 which was huge and you could not even image just by looking from the outside.
再问： 神呐！！你有没有空，我这边文章发不全...你有空的话帮我一下吧QAQ用QQ也好用什么也好...拜托了
再答： 好吧亲。。回头多给点分把哈哈哈~ +Q 278652967 话说你最好一段一段发。。不然看着眼晕 我给你改完再发下一段把