搜搜考试网帮我检查一下英语语法,错的地方帮我改一下
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帮我检查一下英语语法,错的地方帮我改一下
After Jack woke up,he saw Catherine stood in front of him.”You were fainted at the cookie monster lake,and Harry carried you to me.Why did you go there?It’s extremely dangerous in there.” Catherine said.“I’m a detective.I am here to perish kelpie.I know it’s hard to believe that kelpie is in the lake ,but me and Harry saw her.I still want to beat her down,but I can’t find another ways to perish her.I think I have to give up and leave here.”Jack frowned.”I already knew that kelpie is in our town.I have investigated many ways to perish kelpie,but I am kind of scary to beat her down by myself,so don’t give up,stay with me,and I’ll teach you the ways to perish her.” Catherine said.Jack decided to not leave,and started to exercise.First day of exercise,Catherine called her brother Damon to help him up.Damon exercised Jack by taught him kickboxing,push-up,and training with dumbbells.After 2weeks of hard exercising,Jack started to memorize some witches spells.Jack have no idea that what is the language of the spell,and there were numerous kind of spells.Jack memorized just one sentence from the witch’s spell book:”Sun do vait ho mi go feat yo bai ma ko”(which is the spell that use sun to dry the lake,so kelpie will disappear.) After Jack finished all the exercise,Harry Catherine and him went to the lake to perish kelpie.When they arrived,Kelpie choked Catherine.Jack punched kelpie and saved Catherine.”Take Catherine to a save place!”Jack shouted at Harry,and Jack started to recall the spell that he has memorized.“Sun do vait ho…”Jack uttered a part of the spell,and he suddenly forgot all the skills and spell he has learned.
It’s a spell that can make person that you love to love you.I memorized it secretly,and I planned to use this spell to you.But I just use it to kelpie.”Catherine said,and her cheek suddenly became red.“why don’t you just tell me that you love me?I love you too.”Jack smiled.
Eventually they became a hero of this town,and they have a happy life forever and ever.
After Jack woke up,he saw Catherine stood in front of him.”You were fainted at the cookie monster lake,and Harry carried you to me.Why did you go there?It’s extremely dangerous in there.” Catherine said.“I’m a detective.I am here to perish kelpie.I know it’s hard to believe that kelpie is in the lake ,but me and Harry saw her.I still want to beat her down,but I can’t find another ways to perish her.I think I have to give up and leave here.”Jack frowned.”I already knew that kelpie is in our town.I have investigated many ways to perish kelpie,but I am kind of scary to beat her down by myself,so don’t give up,stay with me,and I’ll teach you the ways to perish her.” Catherine said.Jack decided to not leave,and started to exercise.First day of exercise,Catherine called her brother Damon to help him up.Damon exercised Jack by taught him kickboxing,push-up,and training with dumbbells.After 2weeks of hard exercising,Jack started to memorize some witches spells.Jack have no idea that what is the language of the spell,and there were numerous kind of spells.Jack memorized just one sentence from the witch’s spell book:”Sun do vait ho mi go feat yo bai ma ko”(which is the spell that use sun to dry the lake,so kelpie will disappear.) After Jack finished all the exercise,Harry Catherine and him went to the lake to perish kelpie.When they arrived,Kelpie choked Catherine.Jack punched kelpie and saved Catherine.”Take Catherine to a save place!”Jack shouted at Harry,and Jack started to recall the spell that he has memorized.“Sun do vait ho…”Jack uttered a part of the spell,and he suddenly forgot all the skills and spell he has learned.
It’s a spell that can make person that you love to love you.I memorized it secretly,and I planned to use this spell to you.But I just use it to kelpie.”Catherine said,and her cheek suddenly became red.“why don’t you just tell me that you love me?I love you too.”Jack smiled.
Eventually they became a hero of this town,and they have a happy life forever and ever.
another way （不是another ways）,scared（不是scary）,not to leave（不是（to not leave）,by teaching him（不是by taught him）,heroes（不是a hero）
再问： 看看这里有没有错
再答： another way （不是another ways），scared（不是scary），not to leave（不是（to not leave）， by teaching him（不是by taught him），heroes（不是a hero）
确定对了
再问： 看看这里有没有错
再答： another way （不是another ways），scared（不是scary），not to leave（不是（to not leave）， by teaching him（不是by taught him），heroes（不是a hero）
确定对了